for A Weathered Wall9/23/2005 c1 
42Ian Shweltser
Really sweet. Really really sweet. I really liked the line 'though old and crumbling the walls stand fast.'Beautiful. Keep it up.
~Ian- please review some of my new stuff
42Ian ShweltserReally sweet. Really really sweet. I really liked the line 'though old and crumbling the walls stand fast.'Beautiful. Keep it up.
~Ian- please review some of my new stuff
2/23/2004 c1 32caks
thats cool because you can kinda think of it as something else like a person or something... i dunno its cool!
caks
32caksthats cool because you can kinda think of it as something else like a person or something... i dunno its cool!
caks
2/17/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
Beautiful description... Great format, great rhymes... I like how the last line is like the first line.
138Lina InverseBeautiful description... Great format, great rhymes... I like how the last line is like the first line.
2/17/2004 c1 20Penny so Pretty
This is really good... I like your style... Please R&R my piece(s). And I will review Tom's piece... Very interesting...
20Penny so PrettyThis is really good... I like your style... Please R&R my piece(s). And I will review Tom's piece... Very interesting...
2/17/2004 c1 EludesTheDay
I love the imagery of this, and coodos for being able to rhyme w/o taking away the "feel" of the poem.
I love the imagery of this, and coodos for being able to rhyme w/o taking away the "feel" of the poem.