for The Killer's Game3/1/2006 c1 
136Elliptical Shapes
Wow, this is a really good piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it, the word play is cool and I really got into it!
Keep writing!
Alan.
136Elliptical ShapesWow, this is a really good piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it, the word play is cool and I really got into it!
Keep writing!
Alan.
3/8/2004 c1 11Quidgyboo
Awesome. I love it's sharpness. I tend to avoid poems with simple rhyme (nothing wrong with simple rhyme, it just annoys me sometimes) but I enjoyed this one a lot.
11QuidgybooAwesome. I love it's sharpness. I tend to avoid poems with simple rhyme (nothing wrong with simple rhyme, it just annoys me sometimes) but I enjoyed this one a lot.
2/18/2004 c1 57Literary-lycos
ok.. it's a bit disurbing, but then again... THATS WHAT I LIKE ABOUT POEMS LIKE THIS! godd job
57Literary-lycosok.. it's a bit disurbing, but then again... THATS WHAT I LIKE ABOUT POEMS LIKE THIS! godd job
2/18/2004 c1 38Always Writing
Flows very well, perhaps a little more detail would have inticed the reader further. It's a great poem as it is, though.
-Carrie
38Always WritingFlows very well, perhaps a little more detail would have inticed the reader further. It's a great poem as it is, though.
-Carrie
2/17/2004 c1 R.W. Zeppler
A very nicely written. A little more depth would add some more suspense, but it is excellent the way it is. Very, very nice!
A very nicely written. A little more depth would add some more suspense, but it is excellent the way it is. Very, very nice!
2/17/2004 c1 138Lina Inverse
As sick and twisted as it is... I found this to be a really cute poem :D
138Lina InverseAs sick and twisted as it is... I found this to be a really cute poem :D
2/17/2004 c1 20Penny so Pretty
I thought it was impossible but I am truly impressed... Well, I do get impressed but this was fantastic! Good God1 This is so great!
20Penny so PrettyI thought it was impossible but I am truly impressed... Well, I do get impressed but this was fantastic! Good God1 This is so great!
2/17/2004 c1 4Lobstercan
that was great in a freaky/ cool way Great job! hehe i didn't expect anyone to review the uncle ralph one! it's kinda an inside joke, it's not supposed to be serious er ne thing lol thanx for the review though. WRITE ON!
4Lobstercanthat was great in a freaky/ cool way Great job! hehe i didn't expect anyone to review the uncle ralph one! it's kinda an inside joke, it's not supposed to be serious er ne thing lol thanx for the review though. WRITE ON!
2/15/2004 c1 15DarkPresence
wow, this is awesome! Vague, yet detailed at the same time... keep writing, you're really good at it!
15DarkPresencewow, this is awesome! Vague, yet detailed at the same time... keep writing, you're really good at it!