for Sex, Lies, and High School12/20/2009 c19 
4MaPluie
Oh, I like this chapter very much. I hope Sniper & Tia would end up together. :D I'm liking this story very much right now.
Merry Christmas!
4MaPluieOh, I like this chapter very much. I hope Sniper & Tia would end up together. :D I'm liking this story very much right now.
Merry Christmas!
12/20/2009 c19 4L. Valdez
G'ah. Okay. I started reading this story today and I haven't been able to stop! Seriously. There is two feet of snow in my front yard, but instead of playing in it I had to read all of this until the very last chapter. At first the characters seemed a bit cliche to me, but then with a little help from the narrator and a lot of wondrous things on behalf of the characters I began to see the uniqueness of all of them, and the story itself. This story has been complete torture for me though! You've turned me into one of those people that shouts at the words even though I know my shouts won't sway the characters. Snipers and Tia's story has got me on edge and I think it's perfectly safe to say that you've just won over another reader who is going to stick with you until you finish this story (and maybe after too :) )
Please Update Soon!
Thank you,
L.V.
4L. ValdezG'ah. Okay. I started reading this story today and I haven't been able to stop! Seriously. There is two feet of snow in my front yard, but instead of playing in it I had to read all of this until the very last chapter. At first the characters seemed a bit cliche to me, but then with a little help from the narrator and a lot of wondrous things on behalf of the characters I began to see the uniqueness of all of them, and the story itself. This story has been complete torture for me though! You've turned me into one of those people that shouts at the words even though I know my shouts won't sway the characters. Snipers and Tia's story has got me on edge and I think it's perfectly safe to say that you've just won over another reader who is going to stick with you until you finish this story (and maybe after too :) )
Please Update Soon!
Thank you,
L.V.
12/20/2009 c19 1AlexisLovesYou
Quick updates. I loved this chapter, but am still frustrated with Tia. Just dump Ice already. If you like someone more than the guy you're seeing, be fare to him and don't lead him on. It's just mean and totally unnecessary.
1AlexisLovesYouQuick updates. I loved this chapter, but am still frustrated with Tia. Just dump Ice already. If you like someone more than the guy you're seeing, be fare to him and don't lead him on. It's just mean and totally unnecessary.
12/20/2009 c19 2THis doesn't even exist
It was a long wait for this chapter, but it was completely worth it.
You do a great job at making everything realistic. It's normally hard to do that when you are trying to get to a certain point in a story. I see so many authors that just say screw it, and have a completely impossible scenario just to get there story going in the right direction rather than making smaller more realistic steps.
I can't wait until the next update
~Chelsey
2THis doesn't even existIt was a long wait for this chapter, but it was completely worth it.
You do a great job at making everything realistic. It's normally hard to do that when you are trying to get to a certain point in a story. I see so many authors that just say screw it, and have a completely impossible scenario just to get there story going in the right direction rather than making smaller more realistic steps.
I can't wait until the next update
~Chelsey
12/20/2009 c19 12All Over You
oh my. what a tangled web our little tia has weaved.
drama, drama, drama.
i enjoyed it, if i do say so myself :]
merry christmas to you too!
12All Over Youoh my. what a tangled web our little tia has weaved.
drama, drama, drama.
i enjoyed it, if i do say so myself :]
merry christmas to you too!
12/20/2009 c19 4smileinthemira
HAHAH YOU used fwb :) I am soo happy u could use it. :) this is good bye the way and faster updates would be cool :D
4smileinthemiraHAHAH YOU used fwb :) I am soo happy u could use it. :) this is good bye the way and faster updates would be cool :D
12/20/2009 c19 CherryCokeZero
YAY! Its like an early Christmas present! Everytime i get a new chapter i love it even more. Unbelieveable job yet again. I really cant wait for her to break the hell up with Ice. Soon hopefully :)
BTW: Merry Christmas, i hope you have a amazing day with your loved ones.
YAY! Its like an early Christmas present! Everytime i get a new chapter i love it even more. Unbelieveable job yet again. I really cant wait for her to break the hell up with Ice. Soon hopefully :)
BTW: Merry Christmas, i hope you have a amazing day with your loved ones.
12/20/2009 c19 chocolatechipash
i liked this chapter even though it seemed more like a filler and its pretty funny watching her cheat on ice. i still cant decide between ice and sniper, they are both so so sweet! and thank you, merry christmas to you too and hope you get some rockin' pressies :). im off to read your new story now
i liked this chapter even though it seemed more like a filler and its pretty funny watching her cheat on ice. i still cant decide between ice and sniper, they are both so so sweet! and thank you, merry christmas to you too and hope you get some rockin' pressies :). im off to read your new story now
12/20/2009 c19 xXvamp-obsessionXx
Great chapter! But I would just like to say that the AN in the first chapter is unnecessary! While it is noticeable that your writing has improved over the course of the story, I don't think it's necessary to announce to the world that you think your first chapters are not good. They are, in fact, very good, it's just that the later ones are better. I think people would still read past the first few chapters without the AN, but telling them that the beginning is bad may just set them up to expect it to be bad, and they may end up thinking it's bad even though without the AN they might not have.
And I like the idea of splitting the chapters in half. I love long chapters, but I found today that I could barely remember anything that had happened before and I had to go back and reread the last chapter.
Great chapter! But I would just like to say that the AN in the first chapter is unnecessary! While it is noticeable that your writing has improved over the course of the story, I don't think it's necessary to announce to the world that you think your first chapters are not good. They are, in fact, very good, it's just that the later ones are better. I think people would still read past the first few chapters without the AN, but telling them that the beginning is bad may just set them up to expect it to be bad, and they may end up thinking it's bad even though without the AN they might not have.
And I like the idea of splitting the chapters in half. I love long chapters, but I found today that I could barely remember anything that had happened before and I had to go back and reread the last chapter.
12/20/2009 c19 MK16
LOL
cuddled up on the sofa with a baby between them
HOW CUTE
little family already..
i really love this story! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON AGAIN
even though i know it must be hard to write long ass chapters all the time.. i still hope you do!
great work keep it up (:
LOL
cuddled up on the sofa with a baby between them
HOW CUTE
little family already..
i really love this story! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON AGAIN
even though i know it must be hard to write long ass chapters all the time.. i still hope you do!
great work keep it up (:
12/20/2009 c19 5AmandaHold
I loved your phrase "panty dropping gorgeous." I enjoyed reading this chapter. I like that Sniper and Tia are kind of getting together (minus the fact that Ice is still in the picture, but if you eliminated him then you wouldn't have a story). I'm not sure how long the "no sex" rule will last though considering how they were already. I liked the ending and Tia meeting Sniper's parents. Who is mom is was an interesting development. I wonder if his friends fawn all over her considering who she is and how they act. I could see it, but I think he could be kind of protective of her. I really liked that he's really into his family and helping his mother out. My favorite part was the very end where you had them sitting on the couch with the baby between them. It was a cute ending. Update soon!
Oh, and I think it would be nice to have the quicker updates/shorter chapters. Your chapters have different sections and perspectives so I don't think it would interfere with the flow or anything.
5AmandaHoldI loved your phrase "panty dropping gorgeous." I enjoyed reading this chapter. I like that Sniper and Tia are kind of getting together (minus the fact that Ice is still in the picture, but if you eliminated him then you wouldn't have a story). I'm not sure how long the "no sex" rule will last though considering how they were already. I liked the ending and Tia meeting Sniper's parents. Who is mom is was an interesting development. I wonder if his friends fawn all over her considering who she is and how they act. I could see it, but I think he could be kind of protective of her. I really liked that he's really into his family and helping his mother out. My favorite part was the very end where you had them sitting on the couch with the baby between them. It was a cute ending. Update soon!
Oh, and I think it would be nice to have the quicker updates/shorter chapters. Your chapters have different sections and perspectives so I don't think it would interfere with the flow or anything.
12/20/2009 c19 2hopefaithgrace
Woah a long chapter! Ah I love Sniper, I want him to myself, but I do feel awfully sorry for him... :( but i absolutely love your story.
2hopefaithgraceWoah a long chapter! Ah I love Sniper, I want him to myself, but I do feel awfully sorry for him... :( but i absolutely love your story.
12/20/2009 c19 Ms.Romantic
i lovee thiss story.
but i dunno how i feel about her cheating with sniper...
i mean sniper and her nned to get together
but i think she should just break up with ice...
i lovee thiss story.
but i dunno how i feel about her cheating with sniper...
i mean sniper and her nned to get together
but i think she should just break up with ice...
12/20/2009 c19 6A.K.A. Writer's Block
Oh my god. Giving Sniper a family was literally the best thing you could have done, especially to make him and Tia get together.
Because once you give somebody a family, especially one with a baby, that's it.
Anyway.
I am madly, wildly in love with this story.
Especially this chapter. It was fantastic.
So happy for the update!
-aka.
6A.K.A. Writer's BlockOh my god. Giving Sniper a family was literally the best thing you could have done, especially to make him and Tia get together.
Because once you give somebody a family, especially one with a baby, that's it.
Anyway.
I am madly, wildly in love with this story.
Especially this chapter. It was fantastic.
So happy for the update!
-aka.
12/9/2009 c18 J
love this story!
please update :) cant wait
love this story!
please update :) cant wait