for Sex, Lies, and High School10/19/2009 c17 
2THis doesn't even exist
At first i wasn't too sure if this story would work out.
I didn't think I would like it very much, but it has definitely taken a turn for the better.
The character development is very good, although Bri annoys the fuck out of me.
It also seems like you enjoy pointing out "fat" people.
I think it has something to do with the characters, but even though it is only mentioned a few times, I still think it's more than necessary.
I was under the impression that this story was complete, but I didn't check it, so imagine my surprise when I get to this last chapter, and freak out.
The story is good, certain scenes were hot, although, the title made me expect a lot more than what has been given already.
and I can't wait for you to post again.
~Chelsey
2THis doesn't even existAt first i wasn't too sure if this story would work out.
I didn't think I would like it very much, but it has definitely taken a turn for the better.
The character development is very good, although Bri annoys the fuck out of me.
It also seems like you enjoy pointing out "fat" people.
I think it has something to do with the characters, but even though it is only mentioned a few times, I still think it's more than necessary.
I was under the impression that this story was complete, but I didn't check it, so imagine my surprise when I get to this last chapter, and freak out.
The story is good, certain scenes were hot, although, the title made me expect a lot more than what has been given already.
and I can't wait for you to post again.
~Chelsey
10/12/2009 c17 19Raycheld84
OMG! I just reread this whole thing and I still love it. I think I like Sniper better than Ice now. When I first read this, I totally like Ice better, but he can be kind of rude sometimes...not that Sniper can't be too, lol. I'm just as conflicted as ever. You have to continue this story, I love it!
19Raycheld84OMG! I just reread this whole thing and I still love it. I think I like Sniper better than Ice now. When I first read this, I totally like Ice better, but he can be kind of rude sometimes...not that Sniper can't be too, lol. I'm just as conflicted as ever. You have to continue this story, I love it!
9/27/2009 c17 candykillz
I LOVE IT! I hope you update soon, I just started reading this yesterday and I haven't slept yet. Hah. Poor Ice, I wonder what's gonna happen. He's being betrayed by the love of his life and girlfriend.
I LOVE IT! I hope you update soon, I just started reading this yesterday and I haven't slept yet. Hah. Poor Ice, I wonder what's gonna happen. He's being betrayed by the love of his life and girlfriend.
9/4/2009 c17 Kimberly Beckwith
OMG i love Ice he seems hot as hell and so my type lol, but you need to get her the hell over Sniper and fast i like Ice and Tia together and have Snoiper and Tia as friends! Alexia seems horny a lot but mad is it funny i craked up when she said...“You two did the wild and dirty nasty, didn’t you?”
Tia’s mouth dropped open. “The what?”
“In between helping you with Bri, you two had all that free time just to yourselves…” Alexia leaned closer to her friend suggestively, her eyes alight with that spark Tia knew all too well. Someone was feeling mischievous. “The two of you. Alone. In your house. And of course he’s absolutely gorgeous- ”
Tia wanted to cover her ears with her hands. “Nothing happened.”
“You couldn’t help but flirt. But it escalated, and soon you were fooling around. Off go the clothes and you find yourself in you bedroom. No – in your parent’s bedroom. Having hot, sweaty sex in their bed.”
In her parents what? Ew! “Nothing happened!” She said again, her cheeks fire engine red from Alexia’s little game. She was putting bad bad thoughts into Tia’s head. Naked Sniper. M…Her parents bed on the other hand, not particularly arousing.
“You can’t get enough of him. You two do it in Bri’s bed. In the living room. In the backyard. On the picnic table- ”
“Lexia, you’re crazy. Nothing. Happened.”
“In the kitchen. On the kitchen counter. Up against the fridge. On top of the washing machine. Up against the wall-”
“Would you quit it?” Her voice was unusually squeaky, her face flaming in embarrassment.
“In the pantry. In the attic. In the shower. In the basement. On the couch. In the pool-”
I craked up on that i wa like omg cant breath soo funny lol! But really i hope you write more really soon i want to see what Sniper and Tia are going to do with there "Talk" lol! Update soon!
OMG i love Ice he seems hot as hell and so my type lol, but you need to get her the hell over Sniper and fast i like Ice and Tia together and have Snoiper and Tia as friends! Alexia seems horny a lot but mad is it funny i craked up when she said...“You two did the wild and dirty nasty, didn’t you?”
Tia’s mouth dropped open. “The what?”
“In between helping you with Bri, you two had all that free time just to yourselves…” Alexia leaned closer to her friend suggestively, her eyes alight with that spark Tia knew all too well. Someone was feeling mischievous. “The two of you. Alone. In your house. And of course he’s absolutely gorgeous- ”
Tia wanted to cover her ears with her hands. “Nothing happened.”
“You couldn’t help but flirt. But it escalated, and soon you were fooling around. Off go the clothes and you find yourself in you bedroom. No – in your parent’s bedroom. Having hot, sweaty sex in their bed.”
In her parents what? Ew! “Nothing happened!” She said again, her cheeks fire engine red from Alexia’s little game. She was putting bad bad thoughts into Tia’s head. Naked Sniper. M…Her parents bed on the other hand, not particularly arousing.
“You can’t get enough of him. You two do it in Bri’s bed. In the living room. In the backyard. On the picnic table- ”
“Lexia, you’re crazy. Nothing. Happened.”
“In the kitchen. On the kitchen counter. Up against the fridge. On top of the washing machine. Up against the wall-”
“Would you quit it?” Her voice was unusually squeaky, her face flaming in embarrassment.
“In the pantry. In the attic. In the shower. In the basement. On the couch. In the pool-”
I craked up on that i wa like omg cant breath soo funny lol! But really i hope you write more really soon i want to see what Sniper and Tia are going to do with there "Talk" lol! Update soon!
8/29/2009 c17 2priscus-aoife
aargh! cliffhanger! i can't wait for the next chapter! i liked what happened between tia and sniper, though not so much that she was cheating on ice. he seems like a good guy. please PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
2priscus-aoifeaargh! cliffhanger! i can't wait for the next chapter! i liked what happened between tia and sniper, though not so much that she was cheating on ice. he seems like a good guy. please PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
8/26/2009 c7 3love-forever
HAHAHA my goodness you are very clever! "I'm still confused, please repeat your explaination." Hahaha wow. That may've been the best line I've heard in a while.
I really dislike how hot you've made everyone. It's not fair that they're fictional. Please send Ice and Sniper to my school. Thank you. (BTW, I was kidding about the whole 'hate how they're hot' thing. I actually love it)
So I'll keep reading the story now, and I'll cry when I reach the end.
3love-foreverHAHAHA my goodness you are very clever! "I'm still confused, please repeat your explaination." Hahaha wow. That may've been the best line I've heard in a while.
I really dislike how hot you've made everyone. It's not fair that they're fictional. Please send Ice and Sniper to my school. Thank you. (BTW, I was kidding about the whole 'hate how they're hot' thing. I actually love it)
So I'll keep reading the story now, and I'll cry when I reach the end.
8/26/2009 c17 Jester79
Great story so far. I actually just found it a couple of days ago. After I saw the beginning date, I wasn't sure if it was going to get completed. Typically, I go for stories already finished so I'm not left hanging. But, the first chapter hooked me and I noted the last post date so I'm hopeful you'll follow thru. Definitely, hard to choose between Sniper & Tia/ Ice & Tia.
Great story so far. I actually just found it a couple of days ago. After I saw the beginning date, I wasn't sure if it was going to get completed. Typically, I go for stories already finished so I'm not left hanging. But, the first chapter hooked me and I noted the last post date so I'm hopeful you'll follow thru. Definitely, hard to choose between Sniper & Tia/ Ice & Tia.
8/18/2009 c17 3LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRs
AH! Cliffie! w Don't have a heart attack! You're getting closer and closer to 500!
3LEMonSArTiFiCiAlVoDkAandChAiRsAH! Cliffie! w Don't have a heart attack! You're getting closer and closer to 500!
8/17/2009 c17 kakimon
Ok, all I can say is... OMG! THIS BOOK IS AWESOME TIMES 1 MILLION! You are an amazing author and what you have written is a romantic miracle in my lifeless life. My favorite character has to be Sniper, because, I have had romantic run ins with the bad boys in my school. Anyway... praying for the next update and praying you will publish this book. OMG I'm spazzing out! Please... please continue no matter what stops you. I hope you will RnR my books, A Miracle with Mermen, and I'm in Love with A Vampire. Good luck and happy summer to you!
- OrangeRose143
Ok, all I can say is... OMG! THIS BOOK IS AWESOME TIMES 1 MILLION! You are an amazing author and what you have written is a romantic miracle in my lifeless life. My favorite character has to be Sniper, because, I have had romantic run ins with the bad boys in my school. Anyway... praying for the next update and praying you will publish this book. OMG I'm spazzing out! Please... please continue no matter what stops you. I hope you will RnR my books, A Miracle with Mermen, and I'm in Love with A Vampire. Good luck and happy summer to you!
- OrangeRose143
8/4/2009 c17 1obsessivity
Omg
LOL
GOD I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! Grr.
(:
But frig man; the new chapter is YUMMY ;D
They actually kissed. come on give me an "awh"
LOL
the douche thought it was a dream :P
i lovee sniper, especially with his cute, adorable, confused momments;
GIVE ME MORE OF THOSE 8D
LOL
HELL; Give me a new chapter 8D!
UPDATE ASAP. :D
1obsessivityOmg
LOL
GOD I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! Grr.
(:
But frig man; the new chapter is YUMMY ;D
They actually kissed. come on give me an "awh"
LOL
the douche thought it was a dream :P
i lovee sniper, especially with his cute, adorable, confused momments;
GIVE ME MORE OF THOSE 8D
LOL
HELL; Give me a new chapter 8D!
UPDATE ASAP. :D
8/3/2009 c1 Jake
Hey there. Wanted to check out your story, but I'm sorry to say - Tia? She's a Sue.
You make her far too perfect, everyone likes her too much. She's not realistic.
I don't read stuff with characters who aren't -real-. Have something bad happen to her, alright? Otherwise this story is just gonna be boring from start to finish.
Hey there. Wanted to check out your story, but I'm sorry to say - Tia? She's a Sue.
You make her far too perfect, everyone likes her too much. She's not realistic.
I don't read stuff with characters who aren't -real-. Have something bad happen to her, alright? Otherwise this story is just gonna be boring from start to finish.
8/2/2009 c17 candy-shop-owner
Awesome update im so glad ur with this story again..
Love it and cant wait for the drama with sniper... *sigh* hes just so awesome...
update soon
Awesome update im so glad ur with this story again..
Love it and cant wait for the drama with sniper... *sigh* hes just so awesome...
update soon