for Sex, Lies, and High School8/1/2009 c17 
6Drips of Blue-Green Turpentine
okay. So. I guess I can say your character developement is good but that doesnt meet I dont have a few complaints. yes humor is good but realism is a good part of humor too. the fact that everything bad seems to happen to someone fat or chubbie is very annoying. Not to mention how many times the girls say emigawd. Alors make it noted that irl people dont trip over whomever is popular and sometimes that isnt clearly defined. ALso teachers dont just let people off of trouble when caught skipping. Iparticularly dislike how every single person was falling for tia when she and her best friend were already stated as equal and as far as I knew her best friend was prettier at the beginning in my point of view. I find it frustrating to the point that I was thinking how every signle guy in the world is falling for her and then suddenly she is turning straight girls lesbo for her I mean wtf...then there is the whole 7th or 8th grader or something knowing who she is. Point and case no one and I meant no one who doesnt actively participate in something that actually involves kids is known outside of highschool. Okay? cause I know there were some fing populars at my school when I was in middle but I dont know who they are cause middle schoolers have thier freaken head jacked in thier own world. SO...
onto what I liked. I honestly loved the character relationships and your ability to place yourself. YOur ability to turn kurt into something hated and detested is great. How you maintain time frames is good and your ability to cue in alternate story lines is great. Though I wouldsay this is more humor than drama the fact that you were able to hold my attention while thoroughly pissing me off with what I ranted about above gives you high props.
Oh and siblings arent usually so openly bitchy but hey. I dont know for sure. I have a brother the little jerk. ! BUt see I still love him and depite my annoyance with him if he were in trouble I would help him tia and bri I dont get that. SO I could keep complaining but I dont want to discourage you from writing because I honestly think this is great. And in the words of a great review I knew in your next chapter I challenger you to include a horse riding a human on a carousel at some point and relate it to your story ! goodluck hope you take the challenge
6Drips of Blue-Green Turpentineokay. So. I guess I can say your character developement is good but that doesnt meet I dont have a few complaints. yes humor is good but realism is a good part of humor too. the fact that everything bad seems to happen to someone fat or chubbie is very annoying. Not to mention how many times the girls say emigawd. Alors make it noted that irl people dont trip over whomever is popular and sometimes that isnt clearly defined. ALso teachers dont just let people off of trouble when caught skipping. Iparticularly dislike how every single person was falling for tia when she and her best friend were already stated as equal and as far as I knew her best friend was prettier at the beginning in my point of view. I find it frustrating to the point that I was thinking how every signle guy in the world is falling for her and then suddenly she is turning straight girls lesbo for her I mean wtf...then there is the whole 7th or 8th grader or something knowing who she is. Point and case no one and I meant no one who doesnt actively participate in something that actually involves kids is known outside of highschool. Okay? cause I know there were some fing populars at my school when I was in middle but I dont know who they are cause middle schoolers have thier freaken head jacked in thier own world. SO...
onto what I liked. I honestly loved the character relationships and your ability to place yourself. YOur ability to turn kurt into something hated and detested is great. How you maintain time frames is good and your ability to cue in alternate story lines is great. Though I wouldsay this is more humor than drama the fact that you were able to hold my attention while thoroughly pissing me off with what I ranted about above gives you high props.
Oh and siblings arent usually so openly bitchy but hey. I dont know for sure. I have a brother the little jerk. ! BUt see I still love him and depite my annoyance with him if he were in trouble I would help him tia and bri I dont get that. SO I could keep complaining but I dont want to discourage you from writing because I honestly think this is great. And in the words of a great review I knew in your next chapter I challenger you to include a horse riding a human on a carousel at some point and relate it to your story ! goodluck hope you take the challenge
7/31/2009 c17 HEZJA
OMG you updated! :P it was fantastic :D and now just want more :P :P update update update
OMG you updated! :P it was fantastic :D and now just want more :P :P update update update
7/31/2009 c14 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
i think tia deserves ice
but alexia should go max ... that would be the greatest _
and tia should leave ice to someone better while snip goes with her :]]
i think tia deserves ice
but alexia should go max ... that would be the greatest _
and tia should leave ice to someone better while snip goes with her :]]
7/31/2009 c17 1Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994
Ohmigod I'm so glad that you updated this story!I've been watching it tonsee when you would but this story is really great so keep writing! Looking for your next update!
1Goin-to-Cali-bby-10211994Ohmigod I'm so glad that you updated this story!I've been watching it tonsee when you would but this story is really great so keep writing! Looking for your next update!
7/31/2009 c17 6ithinkyourgay
the first part of the chapter was so deep, i nearly cried.
can u make her Tia break up with Ice
and hook up with Sniper already?
its killing them both!
6ithinkyourgaythe first part of the chapter was so deep, i nearly cried.
can u make her Tia break up with Ice
and hook up with Sniper already?
its killing them both!
7/31/2009 c17 3TheInvisiblePinkUnicorn
Yay, you updated! I love this story and can't wait ofr the next chapter :D
3TheInvisiblePinkUnicornYay, you updated! I love this story and can't wait ofr the next chapter :D
7/31/2009 c17 SALTY GOODNESS
YAY i LOVE YOU an update how exciting. Arnt Tia and Snipper just the cutest i feel bad for Ice but not enough to want Tia to stay with him poor Ice. Alexia should wake and smell the good guy right in front of her MAX that would be cute, wouldnt they be a cute couple. And i felt sorry for Bri she is a spaz and a bit nuts but even the losers at my school had friends :( Update soon love this story.
YAY i LOVE YOU an update how exciting. Arnt Tia and Snipper just the cutest i feel bad for Ice but not enough to want Tia to stay with him poor Ice. Alexia should wake and smell the good guy right in front of her MAX that would be cute, wouldnt they be a cute couple. And i felt sorry for Bri she is a spaz and a bit nuts but even the losers at my school had friends :( Update soon love this story.
7/31/2009 c17 inahurrytonowhere
YES! An update! Does this mean the next update will come very, very soon? I can't wait to here what Sniper has to say to her, and I want Tia & Sniper to get together already. :)
I think Ice being so sweet is slightly unrealistic. I don't like that he only noticed Tia after she completely changed her wardrobe for him. However, that doesn't really matter, because she belongs with SNIPER! Yeah!
YES! An update! Does this mean the next update will come very, very soon? I can't wait to here what Sniper has to say to her, and I want Tia & Sniper to get together already. :)
I think Ice being so sweet is slightly unrealistic. I don't like that he only noticed Tia after she completely changed her wardrobe for him. However, that doesn't really matter, because she belongs with SNIPER! Yeah!
7/31/2009 c17 Cowgoesmoo
Wow :o things r really getting steamy with Tia and Sniper and I can't wait for more. It also seems like something will go on with Ice and Bri but that is just a theory. Anyways thanks for the ipdate and here is one more review for your goal to reach 500 ;D
Wow :o things r really getting steamy with Tia and Sniper and I can't wait for more. It also seems like something will go on with Ice and Bri but that is just a theory. Anyways thanks for the ipdate and here is one more review for your goal to reach 500 ;D
7/30/2009 c17 MK16
AHH YAY
does this mean the next chappie will be up soon? :D
i really like this story !
please keep it up
need. to. read. MORE
^_^
AHH YAY
does this mean the next chappie will be up soon? :D
i really like this story !
please keep it up
need. to. read. MORE
^_^
7/30/2009 c12 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
no offsense.. but is tia acting kinda like a bitch lately
and like shes acting kinda high-matince around ice
not cool :\
sorry.. i had to say it
no offsense.. but is tia acting kinda like a bitch lately
and like shes acting kinda high-matince around ice
not cool :\
sorry.. i had to say it
7/30/2009 c17 CarolinaGirl
I love this story. I hope the next update is soon...I have to know what Sniper is going to say to Tia.
I love this story. I hope the next update is soon...I have to know what Sniper is going to say to Tia.
7/30/2009 c9 turp speaks french
Its not nes pas its n'est-ce pas and it is french for is it not
Its not nes pas its n'est-ce pas and it is french for is it not
7/30/2009 c10 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
Ice simply shrugged. “Hot I’d bang. Beautiful I’d marry.”
yes! that quotes is amazing ^_^
Ice simply shrugged. “Hot I’d bang. Beautiful I’d marry.”
yes! that quotes is amazing ^_^