for Untitled2/16/2004 c1 Erisinia
Oh, this is lovely. Lovely lovely imagery, good rhyme, nice rythm. Superb. *prints off*
Oh, this is lovely. Lovely lovely imagery, good rhyme, nice rythm. Superb. *prints off*
2/15/2004 c1 
20midnights shadow
This is a beautiful, well-written poem. Only one suggestion (although not a necessary one...), it might read a little smoother if it read-"All the world bows...". Only a suggestion, and from a not so competent source.
20midnights shadowThis is a beautiful, well-written poem. Only one suggestion (although not a necessary one...), it might read a little smoother if it read-"All the world bows...". Only a suggestion, and from a not so competent source.
2/15/2004 c1 292Fabian Cortez
This is certainly very well written and beautifully described.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
check out some of mine I think you may be someone to appreciate them. I hope :¬D
292Fabian CortezThis is certainly very well written and beautifully described.
Very Well Done
Keep Writing!
F.C
check out some of mine I think you may be someone to appreciate them. I hope :¬D