for Once5/1/2004 c5 playing round
omg! haahhaha i was getting confused! i had NO idea wat was going on! i mean..i was reading chapter 6 and was like...book?story? wat story? so i went back to chapter 5 and it was changed! hahah noe im getting it! but i htink u should tell people in the 6th chapter..or we would be very confused!
hahah..but that other chapter was very amusing..heheheh!
omg! haahhaha i was getting confused! i had NO idea wat was going on! i mean..i was reading chapter 6 and was like...book?story? wat story? so i went back to chapter 5 and it was changed! hahah noe im getting it! but i htink u should tell people in the 6th chapter..or we would be very confused!
hahah..but that other chapter was very amusing..heheheh!
4/25/2004 c6 
8i.forgive.you
Thank you for correcting chapter 5, it's fun. This chapter was great. I liked that.
8i.forgive.youThank you for correcting chapter 5, it's fun. This chapter was great. I liked that.
4/24/2004 c6 YOUR FAV. CUZ
Omg i love this story...You must write more now...I mean now...don't stand there reading this...write
Omg i love this story...You must write more now...I mean now...don't stand there reading this...write
4/4/2004 c5 6xFaithandTrust33
see i reviewed your story...now you can return the favor. *hint hint* Great Chapter! I love your stories. Can't wait to read that new one *wink wink*
6xFaithandTrust33see i reviewed your story...now you can return the favor. *hint hint* Great Chapter! I love your stories. Can't wait to read that new one *wink wink*
3/14/2004 c5 airelothwen
*scrunchy face* That seemed random. I liked it, but it did seem random. Was she like remebering? or was it like a dream or like a new character called Sam? Or was it a mistake?
*scrunchy face* That seemed random. I liked it, but it did seem random. Was she like remebering? or was it like a dream or like a new character called Sam? Or was it a mistake?
3/14/2004 c5 yu-chi
whos aiden?
did i miss sumthin?
whos aiden?
did i miss sumthin?
3/13/2004 c5 Kuri
...who's Aiden?...but that was a good chapter ^-^
...who's Aiden?...but that was a good chapter ^-^
3/1/2004 c4 1Princess Rayna
Your story is really rich with new ideas! your word choice is really descripive! please keep writting!
1Princess RaynaYour story is really rich with new ideas! your word choice is really descripive! please keep writting!
3/1/2004 c1 Princess Rayna
this one is a lot different from your other work! but i find it wonderful! i will read on now!
this one is a lot different from your other work! but i find it wonderful! i will read on now!
3/1/2004 c4 8i.forgive.you
Please stop torturing me by ending it at the best part, that's called cruel and unusual punishment. *starts bawling*
8i.forgive.youPlease stop torturing me by ending it at the best part, that's called cruel and unusual punishment. *starts bawling*
3/1/2004 c3 i.forgive.you
Why must you torture me by ending the chapter everytime the story gets good. *starts crying*
Why must you torture me by ending the chapter everytime the story gets good. *starts crying*
3/1/2004 c2 i.forgive.you
Oh come on! Why did you have to end it there of all places, why must you torture me?
Oh come on! Why did you have to end it there of all places, why must you torture me?