for The Color of the Desert5/23/2004 c1 
53Shayndel
Wow. It reminds me of the little stands of trees you see in Oklahoma. It's a grove on the inside, but you can look outwards and see a desert land. The imagery in the poem's really good, and the meaning touches you, also. I like it ^_^.
53ShayndelWow. It reminds me of the little stands of trees you see in Oklahoma. It's a grove on the inside, but you can look outwards and see a desert land. The imagery in the poem's really good, and the meaning touches you, also. I like it ^_^.
5/19/2004 c1 21Topaz Waters
So pretty, I adore it..."But slowly I percived the color of the desert/Was hidden through these fallen leaves." It's just beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
21Topaz WatersSo pretty, I adore it..."But slowly I percived the color of the desert/Was hidden through these fallen leaves." It's just beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
4/12/2004 c1 whyt forest
i know the whole point of poems is to be poetic but that was so beautiful and poetic! great imagery, good connotations.
peace and love
~whyt forest~
i know the whole point of poems is to be poetic but that was so beautiful and poetic! great imagery, good connotations.
peace and love
~whyt forest~
4/11/2004 c1 Writer of Darkness
That is honestly one of the very best poems I have ever read. It's just beautiful, and you have such a talent, such a way with words. :)
Thanks for the reviews, BTW. I'm actually a vegan. I've been a vegetarian all of my life, but I became a vegan last year. It's been hard, and I still miss sour cream and onion potato chips and hot fudge sundaes, but it's a healthier way to live and it helps the animals.
Keep writing and check out my poems, too. I value them 10 times as much as that work of fiction. (I'm actually probably going to take it off after a few reviews. )
That is honestly one of the very best poems I have ever read. It's just beautiful, and you have such a talent, such a way with words. :)
Thanks for the reviews, BTW. I'm actually a vegan. I've been a vegetarian all of my life, but I became a vegan last year. It's been hard, and I still miss sour cream and onion potato chips and hot fudge sundaes, but it's a healthier way to live and it helps the animals.
Keep writing and check out my poems, too. I value them 10 times as much as that work of fiction. (I'm actually probably going to take it off after a few reviews. )
2/17/2004 c1 8Tempest Breeze
flawless as far as I can tell. I could almost see the picture you painted
8Tempest Breezeflawless as far as I can tell. I could almost see the picture you painted
2/17/2004 c1 52Porphyrophobic Grape
wow this is really beautiful. I love the flow if it and the picture you painted is amazing. its not too long and not too short, the perfect length for what you said, i love it,
52Porphyrophobic Grapewow this is really beautiful. I love the flow if it and the picture you painted is amazing. its not too long and not too short, the perfect length for what you said, i love it,