3/5/2005 c8 1x-Krys-x
Although,I'm not one to enjoy stories about pop stars and especially all the stars from my childhood,This story is turning out wonderfully. I have a suggestion though, don't use baby as often. It's cute from time to time, but when it's in every sentence it gets highly annoying. other than that, everything is wonderful! I love that you gave situation that other's would think that nothing could happen because of the complications and you made it work! update soon!
Although,I'm not one to enjoy stories about pop stars and especially all the stars from my childhood,This story is turning out wonderfully. I have a suggestion though, don't use baby as often. It's cute from time to time, but when it's in every sentence it gets highly annoying. other than that, everything is wonderful! I love that you gave situation that other's would think that nothing could happen because of the complications and you made it work! update soon!
2/18/2004 c2 Wolfman
Hey...good start.Continue...please!
Hey...good start.Continue...please!
2/18/2004 c1 5someone that hurts
Good work. You going to continue the story? i would love to see what happens.
Good work. You going to continue the story? i would love to see what happens.