for No Ink3/8/2004 c1 Rose Dark Thorn
Funny, I feel like that right now...It's a long story, that's for sure...
Funny, I feel like that right now...It's a long story, that's for sure...
2/29/2004 c1 
17The Misfit of Hudson
I'm left with an ineffable... anyway, this got me good. Simple. Beautiful.
17The Misfit of HudsonI'm left with an ineffable... anyway, this got me good. Simple. Beautiful.
2/19/2004 c1 69til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
I like this poem very much. The imagery from it is great. And I agree with one of the other reviewers that was a great way to end it.
69til-iburnout aka Amanda HeltonI like this poem very much. The imagery from it is great. And I agree with one of the other reviewers that was a great way to end it.
2/18/2004 c1 2In Memoriam
Interesting image. I particularly like the last line, its a very effective way of ending the poem.
2In MemoriamInteresting image. I particularly like the last line, its a very effective way of ending the poem.
2/18/2004 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
I can really feel where you are coming from, i love the end.
Good intensity man.
136Elliptical ShapesI can really feel where you are coming from, i love the end.
Good intensity man.
2/18/2004 c1 Chambered emotions
Awesome poem...I loved how you explained your feeling by comparing it to a ben all bled out of ink...awesome...dont worry tho, your find some creative inspiration somehow...I thought I was blocked and finally, one look at the ocean woke my inspiration up! Great job and keep writing!
Awesome poem...I loved how you explained your feeling by comparing it to a ben all bled out of ink...awesome...dont worry tho, your find some creative inspiration somehow...I thought I was blocked and finally, one look at the ocean woke my inspiration up! Great job and keep writing!