for Chronologic4/6/2004 c1 
5Aake Redfield
Intriguing. Looks great up to now. Same quality, same awesomeness, great piece of work!
5Aake RedfieldIntriguing. Looks great up to now. Same quality, same awesomeness, great piece of work!
3/30/2004 c6 Our Behemoth
:0! RUU. Seth's thoughts are coo.
TIME MADNESS AGAIN. Yee, I'd rather that happen then to stay on that bus. Scary peoples.
:0! RUU. Seth's thoughts are coo.
TIME MADNESS AGAIN. Yee, I'd rather that happen then to stay on that bus. Scary peoples.
3/23/2004 c1 2Dean Moriarty
Awesome story. Just awesome. The description's wonderful... I just can't say enough good things.
PS- I have an iMac, and I can't download stories onto the net. Period. I dunno what I'm doing wrong, so if anyone has an idea, PLEASE EMAIL ME AT !
CS
2Dean MoriartyAwesome story. Just awesome. The description's wonderful... I just can't say enough good things.
PS- I have an iMac, and I can't download stories onto the net. Period. I dunno what I'm doing wrong, so if anyone has an idea, PLEASE EMAIL ME AT !
CS
3/17/2004 c5 Wafflecat1
YAY HUDSON AND AEVA MEET PARTY TIME
More excitement! Haha, I love Hudson. And I love Aeva's reaction toward seeing him. :D
YAY HUDSON AND AEVA MEET PARTY TIME
More excitement! Haha, I love Hudson. And I love Aeva's reaction toward seeing him. :D
3/17/2004 c5 2BLARGH00000009
I can't believe I didn't review this when you first put it out, because honestly, this chapter, when I first read it, made me squeal, and get that fluttery feeling in my stomach. You know what I mean? Like, "SO COOL! EE!" XD Please please, next chapter soon! Of course, don't rush, because it's your project, but. . . you know. XD
2BLARGH00000009I can't believe I didn't review this when you first put it out, because honestly, this chapter, when I first read it, made me squeal, and get that fluttery feeling in my stomach. You know what I mean? Like, "SO COOL! EE!" XD Please please, next chapter soon! Of course, don't rush, because it's your project, but. . . you know. XD
3/6/2004 c4 Our Behemoth
YAY AEVA HAS CAME INTO THE STORY.
It's kind of spooky how all of the people meet up in the same place in the house. LIKE IT'S MAGIC.
I am silly :( But yeah, now that I can kind of see what's going on, I'm becoming more interested. NEED MORE
YAY AEVA HAS CAME INTO THE STORY.
It's kind of spooky how all of the people meet up in the same place in the house. LIKE IT'S MAGIC.
I am silly :( But yeah, now that I can kind of see what's going on, I'm becoming more interested. NEED MORE
3/5/2004 c4 annaj
i saw a link for this on deviantart. it looked kind of wierd but i figured why not see it, right? lol
lol i love the idea of a woman run culture! i dont get how Hudson and Wallace ar in the same place, but that comes later right? hehe i love it so far!
i saw a link for this on deviantart. it looked kind of wierd but i figured why not see it, right? lol
lol i love the idea of a woman run culture! i dont get how Hudson and Wallace ar in the same place, but that comes later right? hehe i love it so far!
3/1/2004 c4 SAM
XD! The Chief reminds me of the older friend you have that you ASPIRE to be but you know if you do try to be like them, you'll be in the ground a lot faster then you would be if you weren't to. (*NEVER MAKES SENSE* BLEE.) Like a friend who's always chain smoking or something...I dunno. |
HEH. *hugs Aeva* X! I was sitting in school today and I noticed that Hudson has his own little...QUIRKS (the YO-YOS...XD) and figured maybe the other two could, too...? (Not that they don't already, but you know.) It'd be funny if one of her traits was that nobody could ever read her hand writting and she could translate it easilly without getting pissed off about it. XD SOMETHING LIKE THAT.
...I believe I shall draw some pictures for your story tonight. HAR!
FUN stuff you got here, buddy. :o
-Sam
XD! The Chief reminds me of the older friend you have that you ASPIRE to be but you know if you do try to be like them, you'll be in the ground a lot faster then you would be if you weren't to. (*NEVER MAKES SENSE* BLEE.) Like a friend who's always chain smoking or something...I dunno. |
HEH. *hugs Aeva* X! I was sitting in school today and I noticed that Hudson has his own little...QUIRKS (the YO-YOS...XD) and figured maybe the other two could, too...? (Not that they don't already, but you know.) It'd be funny if one of her traits was that nobody could ever read her hand writting and she could translate it easilly without getting pissed off about it. XD SOMETHING LIKE THAT.
...I believe I shall draw some pictures for your story tonight. HAR!
FUN stuff you got here, buddy. :o
-Sam
2/28/2004 c3 BLARGH00000009
AHH this chapter was so col. . . I want to see the next one please please. XD
The babies thing sounded really, really creepy. . . ugh. I'd probably piss myself, thinking of that when I thought there was a ghost in my house. XD
AHH this chapter was so col. . . I want to see the next one please please. XD
The babies thing sounded really, really creepy. . . ugh. I'd probably piss myself, thinking of that when I thought there was a ghost in my house. XD
2/28/2004 c3 Our Behemoth
XD! CAVEMAN. I like Hudson. Ruu...Victor scares meh ;O;
CONTINUE NOW O
As before...GREAT DESCRIPTIONS. Yay for ghosts time madness. And I agree with katie, the title is very suiting. XD
;O; IGNORE ALL SPELLING ERRORS IN THE LAST REVIEW
XD! CAVEMAN. I like Hudson. Ruu...Victor scares meh ;O;
CONTINUE NOW O
As before...GREAT DESCRIPTIONS. Yay for ghosts time madness. And I agree with katie, the title is very suiting. XD
;O; IGNORE ALL SPELLING ERRORS IN THE LAST REVIEW
2/28/2004 c2 Our Behemoth
RUU Seth...Wallace..RUU I GOT CONFUSED FOR A SECOND BUT NOW A I OKAY
O WHY CAN YOU DESCRIBE THINGS SO WELL? I like the first chapter of the story, how you introduced Seth, and why he bought the house...And the guitar attack reminded me of FLCL. ALL IS WELL.
-Waff
RUU Seth...Wallace..RUU I GOT CONFUSED FOR A SECOND BUT NOW A I OKAY
O WHY CAN YOU DESCRIBE THINGS SO WELL? I like the first chapter of the story, how you introduced Seth, and why he bought the house...And the guitar attack reminded me of FLCL. ALL IS WELL.
-Waff
2/22/2004 c2 12Beached Stars
YES, I TOO LIKE THE TITLE. *raises hand slowly and is beat over the head by Katie with a very small dog*
Wuu. :o POOR KID. I like how it's moving, it's not RUSHED but it's not so slow that you want to beat yourself with a small dog. I didn't know the one guy was going be so nice. XD! He just LAUGHS...that's messed. XD *would be like, busting caps*
S'all good! I like. WRITE NEXT CHAP-TAR OR I CRUSH YOU.
-Sam
12Beached StarsYES, I TOO LIKE THE TITLE. *raises hand slowly and is beat over the head by Katie with a very small dog*
Wuu. :o POOR KID. I like how it's moving, it's not RUSHED but it's not so slow that you want to beat yourself with a small dog. I didn't know the one guy was going be so nice. XD! He just LAUGHS...that's messed. XD *would be like, busting caps*
S'all good! I like. WRITE NEXT CHAP-TAR OR I CRUSH YOU.
-Sam
2/22/2004 c2 2BLARGH00000009
Oh, I forgot to mention how much I like the title. Yes.
And dood. . . tophat-and-goggles-man. . . could be like a ghost or anything. . . even if he isn't. :[ XD BUT I want to see the next chapter LIEK NOW PLZKTHX. (Or, y'know, when you feel like it.)
2BLARGH00000009Oh, I forgot to mention how much I like the title. Yes.
And dood. . . tophat-and-goggles-man. . . could be like a ghost or anything. . . even if he isn't. :[ XD BUT I want to see the next chapter LIEK NOW PLZKTHX. (Or, y'know, when you feel like it.)
2/18/2004 c1 BLARGH00000009
This is going to be col. XD
*could not write this much in two days if life depended on it*
I really, really like the descriptive nature of the whole thing. You get such a clear image of EVERYTHING. That's so cool.
This is going to be col. XD
*could not write this much in two days if life depended on it*
I really, really like the descriptive nature of the whole thing. You get such a clear image of EVERYTHING. That's so cool.