for The Elderly Couple6/12/2004 c1 unloved
lovely
lovely
2/19/2004 c1 
119AntiPleasure
Different idea and theme to use. I haven't seen a poem like this for a while, I don't think I know anyone who's wrote about an elderly couple before. Nice work, very original.
Jenna xx
check out some of my stuff if you wish =)
119AntiPleasureDifferent idea and theme to use. I haven't seen a poem like this for a while, I don't think I know anyone who's wrote about an elderly couple before. Nice work, very original.
Jenna xx
check out some of my stuff if you wish =)
2/19/2004 c1 15BecomingMyself
Very soft and sweet, well written,with a good flow, subtle rhyming, just a good poem...
Write on!
15BecomingMyselfVery soft and sweet, well written,with a good flow, subtle rhyming, just a good poem...
Write on!