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3/24/2004 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Your writing is always beautiful and heart-wrenching. There's nothing wrong with continuing to write on this subject, either. Each piece is equally chilling and distinct.
3/22/2004 c1 210Kelpylion
Haunting/thoughtful...especially loved the last stanza, which sort of picture-illustrates your emotions after the painful event you are trying to overcome...a car crash, someone dying...
The part about blood flaking out of every orifice somehow makes it sound as if you somehow blamed this 'him' for the accident. Feeling of accomplishing mechanical things to overcome grief...
well-written, well-expressed.
2/23/2004 c1 KJKofsuske
Another beautiful piece. It moves between realism and fantasy, always pensive.
2/19/2004 c1 Evvan
Excellent imagery. There's a typo in the first line of the third stanza, just so you know.

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