for Trilogy of The Demonic Mistake2/19/2004 c1 EvarWing
It's a little confusing at first, I just had to re-read everything ^.^ Other than that, it's sounding really interesting, and I mean that sincerely. I really want to keep reading to understand the story, you've succeeded in making the reader hooked (hehe, well at least me, I can't speak for the majority.)Please continue! I promise to give better reviews when more chapters are up, and the plot sets off. It's a great start!
It's a little confusing at first, I just had to re-read everything ^.^ Other than that, it's sounding really interesting, and I mean that sincerely. I really want to keep reading to understand the story, you've succeeded in making the reader hooked (hehe, well at least me, I can't speak for the majority.)Please continue! I promise to give better reviews when more chapters are up, and the plot sets off. It's a great start!
2/19/2004 c1 
70insert name here
hey, thats really well written, definatly has potential to be really good, i hope u continue,
~brendz~
*tsym for da review*
70insert name herehey, thats really well written, definatly has potential to be really good, i hope u continue,
~brendz~
*tsym for da review*