for Death Draws Nigh5/23/2004 c1 
16Calvin Fitzgerald
Very poetic, short but filled with imagery and characterization. This is the epitomy of what a short story should be on this website. It was thorougly enjoyable to read and your style of writing is refreshing from most of the short stories I read.
Thank you for reviewing some of my other works. I appreciate the effort. I also want to thank you for being curteous about it as well, even if you didn't agree with the politics.
Calvin Fitzgerald
16Calvin FitzgeraldVery poetic, short but filled with imagery and characterization. This is the epitomy of what a short story should be on this website. It was thorougly enjoyable to read and your style of writing is refreshing from most of the short stories I read.
Thank you for reviewing some of my other works. I appreciate the effort. I also want to thank you for being curteous about it as well, even if you didn't agree with the politics.
Calvin Fitzgerald
3/2/2004 c1 Dani
I think i like this one best! You should enter it to be published in a book!
I think i like this one best! You should enter it to be published in a book!
2/20/2004 c1 Pastbyer
Gar... CBB signing in.
Not bad, but I don't suppose it's one of those that you take too seriously (that's the feeling I got anyway). Kinda morbid-y though.
...Or maybe I'm just too sleepy. But it's only 10pm! Hm... Probably accumulated lack of sleep from the week...
Gar... CBB signing in.
Not bad, but I don't suppose it's one of those that you take too seriously (that's the feeling I got anyway). Kinda morbid-y though.
...Or maybe I'm just too sleepy. But it's only 10pm! Hm... Probably accumulated lack of sleep from the week...