for Last Sunset2/26/2004 c1 
29Granite Claws
*claps* Bravo! A story well written. Not all endings have to be happy, it just has to stay with the reader. At the part where the captain felt the gash in his side, I felt like I was there in his place. 0.o Freeky how good you are so early on.
29Granite Claws*claps* Bravo! A story well written. Not all endings have to be happy, it just has to stay with the reader. At the part where the captain felt the gash in his side, I felt like I was there in his place. 0.o Freeky how good you are so early on.