for Tora no Hikari: Kuroraka12/19/2008 c7 Mokima
This story is so awesome...
This story is so awesome...
10/4/2006 c7 
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do you get my drift, this is a funny story.
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do you get my drift, this is a funny story.
5/16/2005 c4 Rabid Reviewer
That was your first lemon? Wow. Good job! ^^ My first lemon sucked... Hehe... So I deleted it. ^^; I like Tiger's character... I'd love to see pictures of the characters. It would be nice to be able to see what you picture them as looking like ^.^
That was your first lemon? Wow. Good job! ^^ My first lemon sucked... Hehe... So I deleted it. ^^; I like Tiger's character... I'd love to see pictures of the characters. It would be nice to be able to see what you picture them as looking like ^.^
1/12/2005 c7 11ShianeCollins
*hehe* I like this story, but May, you should write more...please? *big puppy eyes*
11ShianeCollins*hehe* I like this story, but May, you should write more...please? *big puppy eyes*
11/2/2004 c7 Fr3sHAnImAy
Hey nice fan fiction. I like it. It was pretty cool. And plus the arguement between Carley and Shigatsu. Continue the great work. See ya!
Hey nice fan fiction. I like it. It was pretty cool. And plus the arguement between Carley and Shigatsu. Continue the great work. See ya!
7/15/2004 c7 237battousai24
Please update this soon. I like this story and find it rather... interesting. I'm not into lemon stories, but this one isn't bad at all. I only read lemon fics that have plot and those that aren't written just for the sake of having the sexually explicit scenes. Anyway, once again, please update soon.
237battousai24Please update this soon. I like this story and find it rather... interesting. I'm not into lemon stories, but this one isn't bad at all. I only read lemon fics that have plot and those that aren't written just for the sake of having the sexually explicit scenes. Anyway, once again, please update soon.
7/6/2004 c7 12Kaida
Oh! You really do write good lemons. It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing!
Kaida
12KaidaOh! You really do write good lemons. It's amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing!
Kaida
7/5/2004 c7 Alynxkia
Holy sh!t girl. If thats how you write a lemon with out knowing any of that stuff then you are blees with one hell of an imagination. Sorry I haven't reviewed of late. I say go Carley! Only popcorn? When you have a hot muse who likes you not to mention is nice to you...I don't think so. Yeah. Bob got kicked out for a while. Thank god he took that damn bunny with him. Okay. Moving on to your other stories.
Holy sh!t girl. If thats how you write a lemon with out knowing any of that stuff then you are blees with one hell of an imagination. Sorry I haven't reviewed of late. I say go Carley! Only popcorn? When you have a hot muse who likes you not to mention is nice to you...I don't think so. Yeah. Bob got kicked out for a while. Thank god he took that damn bunny with him. Okay. Moving on to your other stories.
6/27/2004 c2 1Moon Demoness
I'm loving this! Not only is it interesting but it's also hilarious. I was giggling wildly and it was only the first chapter! Wonderful! You are good.
1Moon DemonessI'm loving this! Not only is it interesting but it's also hilarious. I was giggling wildly and it was only the first chapter! Wonderful! You are good.
6/27/2004 c7 4Aura of Light
I like your story aloy. Please update soon! I want to know what happens next.
4Aura of LightI like your story aloy. Please update soon! I want to know what happens next.
6/25/2004 c7 2Jade Mella
I must say I am living this story. So well written in my opinion. I just love Tiger. He reminds me of my friend Gabe
2Jade MellaI must say I am living this story. So well written in my opinion. I just love Tiger. He reminds me of my friend Gabe
6/15/2004 c4 Hentai-Kagome
I am REALLY into lemons so i enjoyed chap. 3! This is a great lemon chap.-even if it is the author's first! But like I said, this is my fav. chap.! Hope more like chap. 3 are written in other fiction!
I am REALLY into lemons so i enjoyed chap. 3! This is a great lemon chap.-even if it is the author's first! But like I said, this is my fav. chap.! Hope more like chap. 3 are written in other fiction!