for Trapped6/28/2006 c1 
7ku
hey i was going thru my authors alert cleaning out all the names that had accumulated there and i saw urs and i thought "hey shes the girl who wanted to kill herself!" and i've checked ur profile out 2 years later and it's good to see written on ur profile your good progress.
7kuhey i was going thru my authors alert cleaning out all the names that had accumulated there and i saw urs and i thought "hey shes the girl who wanted to kill herself!" and i've checked ur profile out 2 years later and it's good to see written on ur profile your good progress.
3/9/2005 c1 Ahemait
wow...that's very deep. sounds like you really put a lot into it. it's really good, i enjoyed reading it
wow...that's very deep. sounds like you really put a lot into it. it's really good, i enjoyed reading it
5/15/2004 c1 13Saxifrage
WOW! THAT WAS AN AWSOME POEM! GREAT JOB! I HAVE NOTHING TO CRITICIZE ON THAT ONE! ^_^
love,
Saxifrage
13SaxifrageWOW! THAT WAS AN AWSOME POEM! GREAT JOB! I HAVE NOTHING TO CRITICIZE ON THAT ONE! ^_^
love,
Saxifrage
4/30/2004 c1 56Celest Covax
"...The senses of fear, of doom and despair
The faces of liars, saying they care
Corpses of friends, of family long lost
Fog all around, like choking exhaust
A heartbeat that feeds my gushing veins
Red marks on an arm, like a striped candy cane..."
56Celest Covax"...The senses of fear, of doom and despair
The faces of liars, saying they care
Corpses of friends, of family long lost
Fog all around, like choking exhaust
A heartbeat that feeds my gushing veins
Red marks on an arm, like a striped candy cane..."
2/29/2004 c1 90Identity
very intense. i really enjoyed reading it. it has such emotion. definitly one of my favorites.
90Identityvery intense. i really enjoyed reading it. it has such emotion. definitly one of my favorites.
2/22/2004 c1 doodle critter
cool...i like it. it's angst, my type of poem. thanks for writing a review for my poem
morbid soul
cool...i like it. it's angst, my type of poem. thanks for writing a review for my poem
morbid soul
2/21/2004 c1 Love and Destroy
I like it! It's kind of confusing what it's about, but it's very poetic and angsty. Sunrise
I like it! It's kind of confusing what it's about, but it's very poetic and angsty. Sunrise