for Time2/27/2004 c1 Samantha
I like this. First attempt or not (i think i read that on the summary), it's good.
I like this. First attempt or not (i think i read that on the summary), it's good.
2/22/2004 c1 
75Amora Elvenstar
awesome. Great use of similies and metaphors. Nice use of words. Don't u ever again tell me u can't write poems. That is a lie. This is great. I almost like it better than your short stories. You can have my job if u want it. Newayz, luv always. b Keep writing
75Amora Elvenstarawesome. Great use of similies and metaphors. Nice use of words. Don't u ever again tell me u can't write poems. That is a lie. This is great. I almost like it better than your short stories. You can have my job if u want it. Newayz, luv always. b Keep writing
2/21/2004 c1 30AchillesMonkey
cool. I wrote a poem about time too. Why don't you check it out. And review(hinthint) ;)
30AchillesMonkeycool. I wrote a poem about time too. Why don't you check it out. And review(hinthint) ;)
2/21/2004 c1 63neverlove again
thats good. i've read many poems about time and everyone's has been different. i like it. keep up the good work.
Kt
63neverlove againthats good. i've read many poems about time and everyone's has been different. i like it. keep up the good work.
Kt