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2/2/2005 c1 16VindictiveGoddessOfPinkRabbits
Its very sweet. It really shows the readers how you were feeling. I like it.
8/17/2004 c1 32SilverRaiine
Your work has a serious sad tinge to it. Mine often does too. 'Monster!' is probably the happiest thing I've ever written, and probably ever will. I loved this and I don't know if I can read much more of your work without crying!
4/8/2004 c1 8the heart's pawn-shop
wow this is really excellent material, however- all though you use line breaks to get a certain effect, i actually think that it makes your work really choppy!
Overall i really liked the way you told a story through your poem
-lunelapis
3/24/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
awe- that's so sad! It's really good, though. I love how it all just comes together.
2/26/2004 c1 Crimson Arranz
This is great... there's a desperate edge in it, but also this tiny hope, somwhere... it's awesome
2/22/2004 c1 72dirt-is-yummy
Wow, that was very good. Thankyou for the review you gave to my poem, I appritiate it alot. :)
-Em
2/21/2004 c1 858Anna178
I like your poem, its something that stands out in the world of dying affection, and un-wanted hate. thanks for reviewing my poem.
2/21/2004 c1 3RazortotheRosary
Hey! Thanks for reviewing my fic! This is really good. Of course I can totally relate. I really like it. Keep writing~

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