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69Lowell Boston
Well done! I'm not sure what the strict criteria on a haiku is, so I can not say if you're meeting the syllable requirement for each line, but I would drop angry in the second line and place it in the first and change impatient to impatiently. This way you have three beats on the first line, two on the second, and three on the third. Take this only as a suggestion. Thanks for posting.
Lowell
69Lowell BostonWell done! I'm not sure what the strict criteria on a haiku is, so I can not say if you're meeting the syllable requirement for each line, but I would drop angry in the second line and place it in the first and change impatient to impatiently. This way you have three beats on the first line, two on the second, and three on the third. Take this only as a suggestion. Thanks for posting.
Lowell