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for Veil of Darkness

2/21/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
Wow! -appalled- I haven't seen anything like this before. I like how all the lines are so long, so you have more space for imagery and description.
"Bright eyes squint against the harsh headlights of a roaring semi-truck
Running across the dark road to safety, clutching the rail with a quivering hand"
I like those verses the most, and it really mesmersed me into the poem. Very well done keep writing!
Jenna xx
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