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2/25/2004 c1 9FlamingMorning
This poem was fantastic! Although, dye should be die. But, the concept and the imagery was amazing. I think it has a very good message. Go with the flow in the hard times.
2/22/2004 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Beautifully Composed.
Minor Point:
Just be careful of the spelling. Dye should be die; unless you are dying clothes. Furry should be Fury. Other than things like that this piece is absolutely sublime.
Wonderful work, a joy to read.
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
If you enjoy poems like this one, check out my poems "Covet" "Moonlight Kiss" "Vision" and "Fairytale" I'd be interested in your thoughts. :¬D

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