for The Realm of Faith5/10/2011 c1 
1Psychotic Romance
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! But I suggest you take out the part "And old men eat apple pie" It just seems so mystical and graceful and then that line turns it into a comedy. But otherwise lovley. :)
-Lee
1Psychotic RomanceB-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! But I suggest you take out the part "And old men eat apple pie" It just seems so mystical and graceful and then that line turns it into a comedy. But otherwise lovley. :)
-Lee
3/2/2004 c1 45Simple Enigma
wow! what more can i say, its so lovely! the imagry is right on the dot and touches me to my very soul. geepers youre good.
45Simple Enigmawow! what more can i say, its so lovely! the imagry is right on the dot and touches me to my very soul. geepers youre good.
2/23/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Engrossed in a lie but willing to die
With a cross at its heart
These people have fallen apart
These last lines are so powerful. Well done.
144Infinite SmilesEngrossed in a lie but willing to die
With a cross at its heart
These people have fallen apart
These last lines are so powerful. Well done.
2/22/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Wow, This entire poem has beautiful imagery. It is uplifitng and sad at the same time. Great Job and keep up the good work!
14arbysauce93Wow, This entire poem has beautiful imagery. It is uplifitng and sad at the same time. Great Job and keep up the good work!