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5/10/2011 c1 1Psychotic Romance
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! But I suggest you take out the part "And old men eat apple pie" It just seems so mystical and graceful and then that line turns it into a comedy. But otherwise lovley. :)

-Lee
3/2/2004 c1 45Simple Enigma
wow! what more can i say, its so lovely! the imagry is right on the dot and touches me to my very soul. geepers youre good.
2/25/2004 c1 60Magpie Poet
hm. creates a moment to reflect after those last lines. nice effect.
2/23/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
Engrossed in a lie but willing to die
With a cross at its heart
These people have fallen apart
These last lines are so powerful. Well done.
2/22/2004 c1 14arbysauce93
Wow, This entire poem has beautiful imagery. It is uplifitng and sad at the same time. Great Job and keep up the good work!

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