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1/10/2006 c1 14kit feral
Aw, cute! I like it a lot, made me smile. My favorite part was the first three lines... little rainbows in a row is a really pretty description. Very adorable, keep writing!
2/23/2004 c1 45flowerthief
Aw. That made me laugh :) Nice idea.
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2/22/2004 c1 27Electra Fairford
Again, too jumpy...there are good ideas here in need of s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-n-g out and being given much more attention. And the occasional rhymes are just annoying.

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