
7/23/2004 c1
51EternalTimexX
wow, like... hateful, not like the other stuff, i see you write... ~Keep writing

wow, like... hateful, not like the other stuff, i see you write... ~Keep writing
3/8/2004 c1
26Jayne-angel
I love the way you end this - it really hits home the anger and the resentment you feel. Considering this poem is about alcoholism (?), I can relate to that anger.
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I love the way you end this - it really hits home the anger and the resentment you feel. Considering this poem is about alcoholism (?), I can relate to that anger.
Thank you for taking the time to review a few of my poems. I appreciate it. Check out some of my new stuff!
2/26/2004 c1
53Lidless Eye
Awesome... a very powerful poem, and a good concept. Great job.
~Lidless Eye

Awesome... a very powerful poem, and a good concept. Great job.
~Lidless Eye
2/25/2004 c1 till-iburnout
*pouts* it won't let me sign in.
This is good and i did enjoy the imagery.
*pouts* it won't let me sign in.
This is good and i did enjoy the imagery.