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7/28/2004 c1 12AliceMercury
I totally see the point...
This is good! :D
4/11/2004 c1 48Silent Laughter
Ooh~ the last line was very good. This is really great... you are so impressingly cynical in a way that leaves everyone completely aware that you aren't always, but somehow you get all your feelings right into words. Life sucks sometimes, hn?
~*~SL~*~
3/28/2004 c1 xzerinieah
I hate the fact that I love your poem. ^^;
Great work.
I have a question, what did you mean when you said "I love that" on your review? Did you love the fact that I was expecting flames or what?
Oh yeah, I'll be advertising here: please read and review Ragnarok. Criticism will be greatly appreciated.
3/25/2004 c1 58floorcollision
i'm in love w/ your poetry-
your thought process is so well explained and i really love the honesty- you aren't trying... you just ARE... and it's beautiful.
this particular poem i really appreciate because i can relate to it so much-
thanks for sharing... r/r more of my poetry?
fc
3/24/2004 c1 21dancingwiththedead
ah, this was incredible! I think you stole my soul to write this one. *favorites this* I feel like I'm the one talking. GREAT POEM
3/14/2004 c1 103Anaiya Illyria
this is good. i dunno what else to tell you except keep writing.
3/14/2004 c1 295schande
Had my share~ oh so contagious. Oh so true -.-
p.s. ty for the review.
3/7/2004 c1 90Dominique Weismiller
I so feel your pain! I'm not too into hig school either, but I suppose it'll pass.
3/7/2004 c1 19white-water-siren
That's so god damn true... very cool, you kimda managed to capture my feelings in your poem, very nice.
3/1/2004 c1 36Samekian
Haha, nice, I like the last lines...the giving in to how you really feel. Nice job.
3/1/2004 c1 17Akera
Very deep, great poem. I love it, and you sum it up so well. Just think, you are going to be out of high school, and you are going to be who you want to be. It is not that long away. I hope everything changes for you, and hope you like the out come.
2/25/2004 c1 74LordK
That was very deep. I like it! I especially like the last part, 'cause it was very... accurate. Beautiful!

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