for Untitled!12/20/2004 c1 Gia D
Um...I dont think I really understand why you have fused two languages together like this.
Um...I dont think I really understand why you have fused two languages together like this.
6/10/2004 c1 bittersweet angel
LOL! I love the poem. Are you people thinking of writing anymore poetry? This is definately going into my favorites.
P.S: Did you people give yourself reviews?
LOL! I love the poem. Are you people thinking of writing anymore poetry? This is definately going into my favorites.
P.S: Did you people give yourself reviews?
5/10/2004 c1 Marina Ahmad
really, REALLY hilarious! my fav. is:
"You are a khusra,
Screw you uloo kay pathay,
Kameenay! I dreamed of you!
You were my sub kuch,
I thought you pyaared me!
How could you pyaar that kuta?"
Great poem guys...if u were aiming at the paindo humor, u definitely got it...
really, REALLY hilarious! my fav. is:
"You are a khusra,
Screw you uloo kay pathay,
Kameenay! I dreamed of you!
You were my sub kuch,
I thought you pyaared me!
How could you pyaar that kuta?"
Great poem guys...if u were aiming at the paindo humor, u definitely got it...
3/3/2004 c1 
9sheza
FINALLY...ive been tryin to find dis poem for about two hours now... good lord...we really have outdone ourselves! my tears o laughter just wont goddamn stop...an im not jokin... i wuz rollin on the ground a while back... ppl...jus remember that the language that weve written in is urdu/punjabi so its perfectly normal if u dont understand it... jus ask eeman if u wanna know, u mite wanna learn some o dese phrases tho...deyll come in handy if u wanna insult sum1!
9shezaFINALLY...ive been tryin to find dis poem for about two hours now... good lord...we really have outdone ourselves! my tears o laughter just wont goddamn stop...an im not jokin... i wuz rollin on the ground a while back... ppl...jus remember that the language that weve written in is urdu/punjabi so its perfectly normal if u dont understand it... jus ask eeman if u wanna know, u mite wanna learn some o dese phrases tho...deyll come in handy if u wanna insult sum1!
3/3/2004 c1 1arse-kadz
dude...whoa...holy crap..man, im laughin soo bloody hard! great job imaan,rejaa,alia!
1arse-kadzdude...whoa...holy crap..man, im laughin soo bloody hard! great job imaan,rejaa,alia!
3/2/2004 c1 jennifer r tyler
ok...i dont' get any of it
ok...i dont' get any of it
2/29/2004 c1 1whitesmoke
hey... i'm actually laughin so damn hard i'm tearin up... hahaha... great job dude!
cheers!
hugs,
iman
1whitesmokehey... i'm actually laughin so damn hard i'm tearin up... hahaha... great job dude!
cheers!
hugs,
iman