for Wanderer6/29/2005 c1 Phayd2Dark
e XD i remember helping you with this story! what ever happened to that...merr, next chapter! WEENESS
e XD i remember helping you with this story! what ever happened to that...merr, next chapter! WEENESS
12/8/2004 c5 slimkitty
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens. And I'm a chick... just for future references. Anyway, I found this because I go through more than the first few pages of the fantasy section (unlike most people). That way, I can find older work that is probably pretty good and doesn't have the reviews it deserves. Sorry the answer couldn't be more entertaining. And to comment on the review you gave me for one of my stories: there will be more diversity and I haven't really gotten enough character interaction in, so you don't really know how most the charcters feel about eachother (execpt for what is shown at face value).
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens. And I'm a chick... just for future references. Anyway, I found this because I go through more than the first few pages of the fantasy section (unlike most people). That way, I can find older work that is probably pretty good and doesn't have the reviews it deserves. Sorry the answer couldn't be more entertaining. And to comment on the review you gave me for one of my stories: there will be more diversity and I haven't really gotten enough character interaction in, so you don't really know how most the charcters feel about eachother (execpt for what is shown at face value).
12/8/2004 c5 Lia
fine. no more threats... but only because you updated! ^_^
evil priestess! ^_^ i always knew pluto was a planet and not some stupid moon! ^_^"
awsomeness! keep writing/updating!
fine. no more threats... but only because you updated! ^_^
evil priestess! ^_^ i always knew pluto was a planet and not some stupid moon! ^_^"
awsomeness! keep writing/updating!
12/5/2004 c5 Koriaena
interesting... *likes feeling sharpish* *pokes shroom* *cackles* *now has many new things to ponder* such as, WHAT KIND OF WORD IS MASTERESS? _ *sighs* ^
interesting... *likes feeling sharpish* *pokes shroom* *cackles* *now has many new things to ponder* such as, WHAT KIND OF WORD IS MASTERESS? _ *sighs* ^
12/3/2004 c4 Lia
*snicker, snicker* oatmeal! fire! he he he he... grr.. what did the do to tessa! T_T me likey her!
oh well. i will wait patiently *cough*not*cough* for the next chapter *whispered* while holding a sharp knife over your head to make sure you write quickly...
*snicker, snicker* oatmeal! fire! he he he he... grr.. what did the do to tessa! T_T me likey her!
oh well. i will wait patiently *cough*not*cough* for the next chapter *whispered* while holding a sharp knife over your head to make sure you write quickly...
12/2/2004 c4 
19Sytenir Antoralon
Hiya, sorry, I completely forgot to review the last few times. Yeah. Anyway, I like this. It's humorous without being funny, if that makes sense. As if the narrator's amused. Harhar.
19Sytenir AntoralonHiya, sorry, I completely forgot to review the last few times. Yeah. Anyway, I like this. It's humorous without being funny, if that makes sense. As if the narrator's amused. Harhar.
12/1/2004 c4 Koriaena
*snickers* Derk eats dead souls for oatmeal. *cackles* *ponders what is wrong with Tessa* So Derk is some god... thing? Or was? calls his 'dad' by his first name... although given alex's character, thats not much of a surprise. *cackles more* i LIKE Derk's threats! ^_^ very creative! ^
*snickers* Derk eats dead souls for oatmeal. *cackles* *ponders what is wrong with Tessa* So Derk is some god... thing? Or was? calls his 'dad' by his first name... although given alex's character, thats not much of a surprise. *cackles more* i LIKE Derk's threats! ^_^ very creative! ^
11/30/2004 c4 slimkitty
This is awesome! You have to write more! Please, please, keep writing this! I don't usually beg but this is really good.
This is awesome! You have to write more! Please, please, keep writing this! I don't usually beg but this is really good.
11/2/2004 c3 Lia
ah... i believe that the scariest thing to find on your doorstep is indeed a cheerleader!
aww... poor dirk has a dilemma.. give the cheerleader what she so rightly deserves or do as his sister wants him
the cheerleader should say something in the next chapter about her hair or her nails or her clothes but other than that you've got her down quite well! ^^ (she's scary)
and you put more history in there! yay! keep writing! ^_^
ah... i believe that the scariest thing to find on your doorstep is indeed a cheerleader!
aww... poor dirk has a dilemma.. give the cheerleader what she so rightly deserves or do as his sister wants him
the cheerleader should say something in the next chapter about her hair or her nails or her clothes but other than that you've got her down quite well! ^^ (she's scary)
and you put more history in there! yay! keep writing! ^_^
11/2/2004 c2 Lia
awsome start! i really like a few things about this.
firstly. i like how you have a bit of history at the begining of the chapter.
next.the boy is awsome! vivid personality and a blend of likeable and unlikeable is very nice
third. the little girl! ^_^ everyone has a cute little girl who is perfect and sweet and blah blah blah blah... i like how she has the speech impediment... it makes her stand out from your "normal" story
yay! awsomeness (i like derk.. antisocial boys are cool! ^^)
awsome start! i really like a few things about this.
firstly. i like how you have a bit of history at the begining of the chapter.
next.the boy is awsome! vivid personality and a blend of likeable and unlikeable is very nice
third. the little girl! ^_^ everyone has a cute little girl who is perfect and sweet and blah blah blah blah... i like how she has the speech impediment... it makes her stand out from your "normal" story
yay! awsomeness (i like derk.. antisocial boys are cool! ^^)
11/2/2004 c1 Liallynne
As commanded, i am reving your story. and you didn't even have to wait a while!
So. the prelude is cool! disturbing visions and the world being destroyed is good!
one thing- was there supposed to be another word in here
"Almost as if the town's people were( i think it would go here) by some cataclysmic event that failed to tear down the buildings or warp the roads."
on to the next chapter!
As commanded, i am reving your story. and you didn't even have to wait a while!
So. the prelude is cool! disturbing visions and the world being destroyed is good!
one thing- was there supposed to be another word in here
"Almost as if the town's people were( i think it would go here) by some cataclysmic event that failed to tear down the buildings or warp the roads."
on to the next chapter!
11/2/2004 c1 tirethminet the leenie
yup. i'll review this later. i'm going to print them all out now... ^+^ :P i am still sick- THE HORROR!
yup. i'll review this later. i'm going to print them all out now... ^+^ :P i am still sick- THE HORROR!
11/2/2004 c3 koriaena
uh... im not exactly the expert on ditzy cheerleader types... *shivers* who'd WANT to be! O.o derk'd better frighten her LOTS if he doesnt want this getting around the school in 5 minutes or less... ^
uh... im not exactly the expert on ditzy cheerleader types... *shivers* who'd WANT to be! O.o derk'd better frighten her LOTS if he doesnt want this getting around the school in 5 minutes or less... ^