for Jealousy2/28/2004 c1 Jill
I think the Haiku you wrote can connect to many people on many levels. Me, especillay! It's a beautiful poem. Write more!
I think the Haiku you wrote can connect to many people on many levels. Me, especillay! It's a beautiful poem. Write more!
2/27/2004 c1 
28frugale
Strangely, the rhymes seem normal to me, even though it's unusual to put any in a haiku.
28frugaleStrangely, the rhymes seem normal to me, even though it's unusual to put any in a haiku.
2/25/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I usually hate haiku's.. THey usually seem forced. Sometimes I think that they are not long enough to get across the appropriate emotion...but yours are just perfect.
144Infinite SmilesI usually hate haiku's.. THey usually seem forced. Sometimes I think that they are not long enough to get across the appropriate emotion...but yours are just perfect.