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12/13/2004 c1 85grim-dreamer
At first, the enjambement puzzled me, but the short lines highlight how painful it is to get these emotions out (quite like a constricted blood vessel?). Effective repetition of "you can't die, not you" and strange reasons why ("you're my reason...for pissing").

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