
7/27/2005 c1
7billyez26
Good start! Keep going with this please! Good way to end the story. Nice little cliffhanger.

Good start! Keep going with this please! Good way to end the story. Nice little cliffhanger.
3/30/2004 c1
4Blindfire40
Good Start. I like the ending of this chapter. you should make the story longer.

Good Start. I like the ending of this chapter. you should make the story longer.