for Who am I?7/20/2004 c1 
9Eyes of Amethyst
hey this is good! i like this poem alot! keep up the good work!
anywayz, my guess would be either god, life, death, or time. yet i think its time more than the rest.
and again... good poem! =)
9Eyes of Amethysthey this is good! i like this poem alot! keep up the good work!
anywayz, my guess would be either god, life, death, or time. yet i think its time more than the rest.
and again... good poem! =)
7/14/2004 c1 10DrunkenMonkeyKing
Hm... My guess would be God, to be honest. And if it isn't that, then my second guess would be time.
Good poem, I liked it alot. Deep, and with meaning, but still keeping a certain amount of that rhythym-ish flow that a poem needs to be a poem and not just a bunch of sentences strung together.
Spirit Guardians got removed? That sucks big time. Maybe you should check with the Administrators if you could post it, but just cut out the drafting thread or something along those lines? If not, you can always set up a website to update it on. If you do, you better tell me, so I can keep reading and reviewing!
10DrunkenMonkeyKingHm... My guess would be God, to be honest. And if it isn't that, then my second guess would be time.
Good poem, I liked it alot. Deep, and with meaning, but still keeping a certain amount of that rhythym-ish flow that a poem needs to be a poem and not just a bunch of sentences strung together.
Spirit Guardians got removed? That sucks big time. Maybe you should check with the Administrators if you could post it, but just cut out the drafting thread or something along those lines? If not, you can always set up a website to update it on. If you do, you better tell me, so I can keep reading and reviewing!
6/10/2004 c1 11Earthsong12
It’s about death right? It‘s very good; nice use of language. Two thumbs up! ^_^
11Earthsong12It’s about death right? It‘s very good; nice use of language. Two thumbs up! ^_^
3/29/2004 c1 20Silence's Song
Wow, that is an amazing poem! I'm thinking it's about God or Time. I love the meter, and its flowing language. It gave me chills!
20Silence's SongWow, that is an amazing poem! I'm thinking it's about God or Time. I love the meter, and its flowing language. It gave me chills!
3/26/2004 c1 132mizu no kokoro
Thats such a cute and thought provoking poem! and no i don't reli know what it is referring too . sorry~
132mizu no kokoroThats such a cute and thought provoking poem! and no i don't reli know what it is referring too . sorry~
3/24/2004 c1 A-wolf-called-Skya- to lazy to log in
I know! I KNOW!YAY! (Hyper) It's God!
i luv this poem. great one, Belle!
i have nothing to say!
-Rachel.
*Every lgend leaves a mark*
P.S. since i couldn't catch you on MSN, i've started a new story. it's called "Dangerous Skies" and its about a sixteen year old who's parents were murdered mysteriously...as she discovers her magic, the thing comes back for her... and who was the the magical creature in human form she saw when she was 6?
she was inspired from my character on Diablo II (Isn't that a different way to be inspired...killing everything in sight!) and her name's Sekaya (sek-kay-a)
I know! I KNOW!YAY! (Hyper) It's God!
i luv this poem. great one, Belle!
i have nothing to say!
-Rachel.
*Every lgend leaves a mark*
P.S. since i couldn't catch you on MSN, i've started a new story. it's called "Dangerous Skies" and its about a sixteen year old who's parents were murdered mysteriously...as she discovers her magic, the thing comes back for her... and who was the the magical creature in human form she saw when she was 6?
she was inspired from my character on Diablo II (Isn't that a different way to be inspired...killing everything in sight!) and her name's Sekaya (sek-kay-a)
3/9/2004 c1 39zelle
I feel so ashamed. And things. School work took me not-so-subtly into a choke hold. AP Exams tied me down and Colleges whipped me into submission.
But I'm back! (sort of) And I WILL catch up with all your stories if it kills me!
I'm not entirely sure...best guess is Time...but I like the mystic quality to this in general *grins*
*scuttles off to catch up on Belle-reading*
39zelleI feel so ashamed. And things. School work took me not-so-subtly into a choke hold. AP Exams tied me down and Colleges whipped me into submission.
But I'm back! (sort of) And I WILL catch up with all your stories if it kills me!
I'm not entirely sure...best guess is Time...but I like the mystic quality to this in general *grins*
*scuttles off to catch up on Belle-reading*
3/7/2004 c1 6Blond Phoenix
I'm not sure... It might be time, but I'm still not sure. I'm not very good at this and you might laugh but it sort of sounds like Jesus to me.
6Blond PhoenixI'm not sure... It might be time, but I'm still not sure. I'm not very good at this and you might laugh but it sort of sounds like Jesus to me.
3/5/2004 c1 Sanderek
Wait! Wait! Maybe it's Age... well, Time and your age are pretty similar. Oh well... whatever.
Wait! Wait! Maybe it's Age... well, Time and your age are pretty similar. Oh well... whatever.
3/5/2004 c1 8Sanderek
Hey! Great poem! I reaaly liked it. Especially this stanza:
Who am I?
I am also the only soldier of death, waiting for you with jagged tooth and poison claw,
Ready to slash, to maim, to kill, to wear you away with slow decay,
To slow you down, dim you eyes, and send stress upon your heart,
A decay that not even the mighty mountains can escape,
For they will wear away, and I will forever stand,
Like the mighty mountain, I will stay unmoved,
But fly free the mighty eagle,
And rule all like the lion in all its majesty.
Anyway, my first guess was God, then I realized this poem was in the "life" section, so I thought Life. But, my final guess will have to be time.
Well, great job! Very nice.
8SanderekHey! Great poem! I reaaly liked it. Especially this stanza:
Who am I?
I am also the only soldier of death, waiting for you with jagged tooth and poison claw,
Ready to slash, to maim, to kill, to wear you away with slow decay,
To slow you down, dim you eyes, and send stress upon your heart,
A decay that not even the mighty mountains can escape,
For they will wear away, and I will forever stand,
Like the mighty mountain, I will stay unmoved,
But fly free the mighty eagle,
And rule all like the lion in all its majesty.
Anyway, my first guess was God, then I realized this poem was in the "life" section, so I thought Life. But, my final guess will have to be time.
Well, great job! Very nice.