for Imminent Death5/28/2004 c8 
22slave to the voices
You have a very odd mind (not that theres anything wrong with that). I can't believe I read all 8 chapters (I'll never get those 15 minutes back). Anyway, this is a very weird, odd, strange piece; great job, keep writing.
**Slave**
22slave to the voicesYou have a very odd mind (not that theres anything wrong with that). I can't believe I read all 8 chapters (I'll never get those 15 minutes back). Anyway, this is a very weird, odd, strange piece; great job, keep writing.
**Slave**
5/26/2004 c8 1Genius-Ben
That was hilariously stupid and I loved it. Bravo.
Although you may want to try writing in a slightly more readable fashion.
1Genius-BenThat was hilariously stupid and I loved it. Bravo.
Although you may want to try writing in a slightly more readable fashion.
5/26/2004 c1 3Tala and Stephy
XDD! So funny! My furby died. That was a long time ago. It went "Doo doo doo dedoo, dedoo doo deh...bzt." And died. :'( *Tear* ;~; XD I love humor...*sigh*
3Tala and StephyXDD! So funny! My furby died. That was a long time ago. It went "Doo doo doo dedoo, dedoo doo deh...bzt." And died. :'( *Tear* ;~; XD I love humor...*sigh*
5/23/2004 c8 Innocent-Spryte-Bystander
LMAO! Those were so funny! I especially liked the Furby one. Heh, I used to have a Furby. I left it in the closet for like days on end and one night while I was almost asleep I hear this, "Its dark in here! A-ah, a-ah!" I was so freaked out till I figured out that it was my stupid Furby in the closet. *rollz eyes* I sold it in a garage sale for like $1 after that. I hate Furbies. *KILLS ALL STUDPID FURBIES IN THE WHOLE WORLD!* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Anyhoo, good job, very funny. Keep it up!
LMAO! Those were so funny! I especially liked the Furby one. Heh, I used to have a Furby. I left it in the closet for like days on end and one night while I was almost asleep I hear this, "Its dark in here! A-ah, a-ah!" I was so freaked out till I figured out that it was my stupid Furby in the closet. *rollz eyes* I sold it in a garage sale for like $1 after that. I hate Furbies. *KILLS ALL STUDPID FURBIES IN THE WHOLE WORLD!* MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Anyhoo, good job, very funny. Keep it up!
5/21/2004 c8 23Homey
This is absolutly hilarious! This stuff is defenitly more down my road! I loved it! Thanx, I really needed that today.
23HomeyThis is absolutly hilarious! This stuff is defenitly more down my road! I loved it! Thanx, I really needed that today.
5/13/2004 c2 OldJoe
this is funny... but please stop advertising for Dream and Write on like, every review you put out there. As much as I enjoy the site, fictionpress reviews are not the place to advertise for it. In fact, I'm writing this in a review to annoy you. I can just go on forevwer. Ill make up a poem right now. 'stop making dream and write reviews, or i will beat you with both my shoes, and show it on the local news'. There. Now STOP!
this is funny... but please stop advertising for Dream and Write on like, every review you put out there. As much as I enjoy the site, fictionpress reviews are not the place to advertise for it. In fact, I'm writing this in a review to annoy you. I can just go on forevwer. Ill make up a poem right now. 'stop making dream and write reviews, or i will beat you with both my shoes, and show it on the local news'. There. Now STOP!
5/11/2004 c1 15Triste-et-seul
You are hilarious. I was having a bad day and since reading Imminent Death I am a lot better...
15Triste-et-seulYou are hilarious. I was having a bad day and since reading Imminent Death I am a lot better...
5/10/2004 c1 1Lauren K
ohh hahahhahaha minor malfunction. Short, funny, I really like it! (adding to favorites)
~Kiara
1Lauren Kohh hahahhahaha minor malfunction. Short, funny, I really like it! (adding to favorites)
~Kiara
5/8/2004 c8 Pitch Black Eternity
Such a mix of twisted humor and hilarity. I Love it.
Such a mix of twisted humor and hilarity. I Love it.
5/8/2004 c8 18harmonybunny
lol, I loved all of these chapters, but this was my favourite because of the
"One shall count to 3 and the race shall begin. Not to 4 which comes after 3, nor 2 which comes before...5 is another number one shall not count to-" line...That's..a Monty Python quote, I think *loves it*
18harmonybunnylol, I loved all of these chapters, but this was my favourite because of the
"One shall count to 3 and the race shall begin. Not to 4 which comes after 3, nor 2 which comes before...5 is another number one shall not count to-" line...That's..a Monty Python quote, I think *loves it*