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8/28/2004 c2 4bfmusashi
wow this shows a lot of promise. you really didn't waste any time getting the reader involved into the story and pointing out some of the key facts...the whole thing with the ring sounds very interesting. the whole story has a lot of potential, i'd love to see it finished.
8/28/2004 c1 bfmusashi
i liked this first chapter quite a bit. it was short and got the background of the story across very nicely-and a creative background it is! i like the whole idea of winter being a time when the monsters are unleashed. i had some trouble getting into this piece initially, but i usually have that sort of trouble when reading the background information behind stories such as this one. so yea, its just me and my short attention span, hah. nice work.

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