for Best Laid Plans3/16/2004 c6 
10Mobius Soul
Hi! Sorry it took me so long to review. This story is quite nice...very original idea with the spherey things. The bits with "Trey" remind me a little bit of Ender's Game, did you ever read that? Very well-written, very nice. Write more!
10Mobius SoulHi! Sorry it took me so long to review. This story is quite nice...very original idea with the spherey things. The bits with "Trey" remind me a little bit of Ender's Game, did you ever read that? Very well-written, very nice. Write more!
3/6/2004 c1 2D'Artagnan Magana
Intriguing from the start and building intensity...love every single word of it. What ever I can do to inspire more brilliant words from those fingertips...let me know.
2D'Artagnan MaganaIntriguing from the start and building intensity...love every single word of it. What ever I can do to inspire more brilliant words from those fingertips...let me know.