
5/11/2004 c1 michelle s
i really like this, the wording is wonderful, great job!
i really like this, the wording is wonderful, great job!
3/6/2004 c1 HideAwayFairy
Wow, cool poem. I like the little beat you got going in the rhyme scheme, especially like the ending. Keep up the good writing!
Wow, cool poem. I like the little beat you got going in the rhyme scheme, especially like the ending. Keep up the good writing!
3/5/2004 c1
59Papillons Noirs
It's so simple, yet it says so much. This is good work and you should be proud of it.

It's so simple, yet it says so much. This is good work and you should be proud of it.