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2/12/2005 c1 13TTG
nice poem strong meaningdifferently writtenkeep on writing
1/31/2005 c1 72Skaprunk
lovely. almost primitive, in a way but beautiful i love it
1/18/2005 c1 42clear solution
Not bad at all, tho so depressive. I like it.
12/10/2004 c1 45Sammy- B
it's short, but i think you expressed a lot through only a few words, and its sad :( ...

okay, bye.

Sammy-B!
10/31/2004 c1 104Skittles1
wow that was very good!
10/24/2004 c1 mark
ohg!that was so touching babe!love ur poetry
10/15/2004 c1 53Anomander
I guess this is the opposent of "You screwed it all". It's much more warmer in telling your feelings. I like this mostly because it's more melancholic (it's my way when making an angsty poem - and believe me, there are lots of those). Good description of you feelings - this is your main characteristic.
9/25/2004 c1 25A SeveredHead
interesting. good job! keep writing!
6/23/2004 c1 bittersweet angel
I like this poem because of the unique way in which it is written and the way how you have managed to express yourself fully anfd yet kept the poem short.
6/8/2004 c1 3Arcania
Very interesting poem. I like it, short sweet, and full of holes that can be read into. Who are the holes for you?
5/20/2004 c1 3atrava -poison
its short but i think its really good
4/17/2004 c1 8IHearVoices
confusing...but totally deep!
4/13/2004 c1 32shinco
I liked that a lot! VERY cool job! ^_^
4/12/2004 c1 Silk Weaker
"you is I need"? I know it's trying to keep with the rhytm, but a little bit of grammar won't help. I'm not saying is bad of course, make no mistake, just trying hop off the bandawagon of people screaming "OMG IT'S FRIGGIN GREAT I LOVE YOU" whether it's good or not. I personally like it, and that's saying alot.
4/3/2004 c1 89lalamushu
this is a good poem. good job! ^_^ thanks for reviewing my piece. ^_^
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