for A Deadly Silence6/24/2004 c1 Bob'N'Cat
I'm envious of the way you write. I almost had to finish the story after I began reading it. But that's a good thing, that you can hook someone's attention as such. Nice work.
I'm envious of the way you write. I almost had to finish the story after I began reading it. But that's a good thing, that you can hook someone's attention as such. Nice work.
3/22/2004 c1 
1X-tacey
whoa..niice.. but is dat it? there'z no more? or is there? cuz itz sorta finishd but itz sorta not.. soo ima not shr..
1X-taceywhoa..niice.. but is dat it? there'z no more? or is there? cuz itz sorta finishd but itz sorta not.. soo ima not shr..
3/13/2004 c1 ShadowChii
...whoa...that was interesting...but nevertheless cool. I like the description, but the ending was a little repetitive, no offense or anything. Perhaps you could describe the death of the man (main character?)in different words?
...whoa...that was interesting...but nevertheless cool. I like the description, but the ending was a little repetitive, no offense or anything. Perhaps you could describe the death of the man (main character?)in different words?
3/7/2004 c1 105KaseyLovesNoOne
WOW! It's almost like you turned a poem into a story. I like that! The wording is deep and it makes you think. It almost made me feel like I was the one saying it all... I like that, too! You're an amazing writer! Keep writing!
105KaseyLovesNoOneWOW! It's almost like you turned a poem into a story. I like that! The wording is deep and it makes you think. It almost made me feel like I was the one saying it all... I like that, too! You're an amazing writer! Keep writing!
3/3/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Hello MG-
Very interesting, for a first person story.
Nicely done. Short, but you kept the power of it running.
Whispers In Silence
26Endless NightmaresHello MG-
Very interesting, for a first person story.
Nicely done. Short, but you kept the power of it running.
Whispers In Silence
3/3/2004 c1 5Luvsdogz
Very very good Mg *to Felineous and tripple Z* You two get a room, sheesh! Uh, just write it into a story like eveeybody wants you to. 0o0o0o0h! You should put Remembering Dana (thats the name, ne?) on here! Talk to ya later my psychopathic friend!
Ja!
5LuvsdogzVery very good Mg *to Felineous and tripple Z* You two get a room, sheesh! Uh, just write it into a story like eveeybody wants you to. 0o0o0o0h! You should put Remembering Dana (thats the name, ne?) on here! Talk to ya later my psychopathic friend!
Ja!
3/3/2004 c1 The GREAT BL-sama
KOOL! I loved that. It was so dark and grewsome, just how i like it. Well, write more, I'm looking foward to more stories that u write. Peace!
~The GREAT BL-sama~
KOOL! I loved that. It was so dark and grewsome, just how i like it. Well, write more, I'm looking foward to more stories that u write. Peace!
~The GREAT BL-sama~
3/1/2004 c1 38DeathRunzDeep
that's a great story. i loved it. it seemd so real... i'm speechless, i've only been in fictionpress for a few months and ur the first one that really caught my attention.
-celine
38DeathRunzDeepthat's a great story. i loved it. it seemd so real... i'm speechless, i've only been in fictionpress for a few months and ur the first one that really caught my attention.
-celine