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3/8/2004 c1 Three Cornered Hat
Oh, yeah, and I think you're obsessed with temperatures. ;)
3/8/2004 c1 30Three Cornered Hat
Yep, your were right, you have a boring life. I'm sure its more interesting on other dayts, right? ::cough, cough:: It's well written, just not very attention grabbing.
3/5/2004 c1 AlienVision
cute.
3/1/2004 c1 1Eads JA
You sound like you did plenty.
The work force, the world after you get out of that repetitive institution, is a lot worse.
Your paragraphs became monotone and lackluster when compared to your opening and second paragraph. You got bored with writting didn't you. You had my attention when you put those little flavor details in. I know you spent more time talking and babbling to your friends. What did you do at home? There is more to the day than just school.
Your opening cuaght my attention, and you had me scoplocked for the first half. You lost me after that.
Hanf in there, life gets better.

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