for First True Love12/23/2005 c1 lady luck
A drabble is exactly 100 words no more no less. Some are more lax and are 200 words {double drabble} but 99% of drabbles are only 100 words. People just don't know the real definition. This is not a drabble.
A drabble is exactly 100 words no more no less. Some are more lax and are 200 words {double drabble} but 99% of drabbles are only 100 words. People just don't know the real definition. This is not a drabble.
3/6/2004 c1 Our Behemoth
This is Waffle. :3 RUU
:D WHY DIDN'T JOO TELL ME OF THIS STORY. *looks at date* RUU Three days ago!
Seriously Mar...You are an extraordinary writer. That's why I look up to you, and try to go to you for advice when trying to write something, because I know you don't make stupid shiznit like other people around here do.
This story has got me interested about Hudson and Seth's relationship. XD RUU I didn't know you wanted to slash them. MORE CONTENT FOR THE STORY. At least now, if some girl character comes around, I won't be like 'BOH', but instead, I'll be like, BACK OFF WHORE HE'S TAKEN
...Wtf. XD! But anyway, I like how you made the guitar sort of represent Seth's sort of parental figure or as something that could both be a gift or weapon against himself. Blehe, I like little story-things like this. CONTINUE YOUR STOREH! The Waffle shall be waiting and eating her fellow classmates at school in the meantime. :3
-LOVE, UMPH
This is Waffle. :3 RUU
:D WHY DIDN'T JOO TELL ME OF THIS STORY. *looks at date* RUU Three days ago!
Seriously Mar...You are an extraordinary writer. That's why I look up to you, and try to go to you for advice when trying to write something, because I know you don't make stupid shiznit like other people around here do.
This story has got me interested about Hudson and Seth's relationship. XD RUU I didn't know you wanted to slash them. MORE CONTENT FOR THE STORY. At least now, if some girl character comes around, I won't be like 'BOH', but instead, I'll be like, BACK OFF WHORE HE'S TAKEN
...Wtf. XD! But anyway, I like how you made the guitar sort of represent Seth's sort of parental figure or as something that could both be a gift or weapon against himself. Blehe, I like little story-things like this. CONTINUE YOUR STOREH! The Waffle shall be waiting and eating her fellow classmates at school in the meantime. :3
-LOVE, UMPH
3/5/2004 c1 
1Hobbitch
Great detail and flow of the language. Interesting metaphors. The piece actually touches you. Muy bueno.
1HobbitchGreat detail and flow of the language. Interesting metaphors. The piece actually touches you. Muy bueno.
3/5/2004 c1 Silbermond
"Music was my first love / and it will be my last..."
Well, hopefully not Seth's last. Do I make any sense?
Anyway, I loved your writing style and your use of metaphors. Great work, I think I have to read your story now...
"Music was my first love / and it will be my last..."
Well, hopefully not Seth's last. Do I make any sense?
Anyway, I loved your writing style and your use of metaphors. Great work, I think I have to read your story now...
3/4/2004 c1 2BLARGH00000009
Sometimes it sort of seems lighthearted, then it's more serious, then it's lighthearted again. . . that's so perfect to display the emotions that Seth is going through. And the last sentence summed it all up so beautifully. You're an incredibly talented author.
2BLARGH00000009Sometimes it sort of seems lighthearted, then it's more serious, then it's lighthearted again. . . that's so perfect to display the emotions that Seth is going through. And the last sentence summed it all up so beautifully. You're an incredibly talented author.