for Walking Home From August5/31/2004 c1 
21Topaz Waters
Beautiful, you think of things in ways I never could...To phrase a road as "A boot put there to trip me"...Now that's poetry. Another excellent piece. :-)
21Topaz WatersBeautiful, you think of things in ways I never could...To phrase a road as "A boot put there to trip me"...Now that's poetry. Another excellent piece. :-)
5/10/2004 c1 12J.A. Swartz
A beautiful piece of poetry...I can honestly hear the sounds of nature when I read it. I see everything that's described like I am walking that same path home. My favorite part, besides the whole thing, would be the part about the sun and the "dripping with its amber rays." Got to love it!
12J.A. SwartzA beautiful piece of poetry...I can honestly hear the sounds of nature when I read it. I see everything that's described like I am walking that same path home. My favorite part, besides the whole thing, would be the part about the sun and the "dripping with its amber rays." Got to love it!
4/14/2004 c1 57tofujunky
I have to say, you are remarkably good with descriptions. You painted it so well that it required no effort from me, the reader, to imagine the scenes. Very impressive.
My favorite part:
"Before I met September,
Before the freezing rain,"
57tofujunkyI have to say, you are remarkably good with descriptions. You painted it so well that it required no effort from me, the reader, to imagine the scenes. Very impressive.
My favorite part:
"Before I met September,
Before the freezing rain,"
4/11/2004 c1 Writer of Darkness
I love this poem. It makes me feel calm and at peace...which is a hard thing for me to feel these days. Thank-you. :)
I love this poem. It makes me feel calm and at peace...which is a hard thing for me to feel these days. Thank-you. :)
4/11/2004 c1 5raeleigh
Ok I don't know how you do this but this is some of the best writing I've seen on here for a long time.
I cannot believe how amazingly you describe things; this is how I want my writing to come across.
Excellent :)
5raeleighOk I don't know how you do this but this is some of the best writing I've seen on here for a long time.
I cannot believe how amazingly you describe things; this is how I want my writing to come across.
Excellent :)
3/31/2004 c1 5chartreuse07
i love you, Renee!
oh. and this too.
but you left out neigh neigh horse in your intro. (nay nay? i don't know.)
5chartreuse07i love you, Renee!
oh. and this too.
but you left out neigh neigh horse in your intro. (nay nay? i don't know.)