for One Day3/4/2004 c1 
8DPTRM
again, sad. Just a bit of advice, I wouldnt put all your poems in "General" if I were you because the size of that category means the poem will go far down on the list really fast. I like this one. Keep writing more of them.
~Militarynut32489
8DPTRMagain, sad. Just a bit of advice, I wouldnt put all your poems in "General" if I were you because the size of that category means the poem will go far down on the list really fast. I like this one. Keep writing more of them.
~Militarynut32489
3/4/2004 c1 150sunstormed
good poem! the rhyming was good and everything flowed well! i really liked the last two lines, great job!
150sunstormedgood poem! the rhyming was good and everything flowed well! i really liked the last two lines, great job!