
4/8/2004 c1
16Wishmaster
This is an excellent start, please write more! Both characters are very believable.

This is an excellent start, please write more! Both characters are very believable.
3/9/2004 c1
39TabusVakarian
Holy smokes! I don't know why no-one else has reviewed this story. The writing is incredible, the story-line intruiging, all in all, Dude, you have me hooked. I can't wait to read more.

Holy smokes! I don't know why no-one else has reviewed this story. The writing is incredible, the story-line intruiging, all in all, Dude, you have me hooked. I can't wait to read more.