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6/11/2004 c1 53Impressionist
i like the 2 line stanzas...it makes for an almost easier read, and it's a nice way to write. yeah...i got nothing, haha well done.
4/13/2004 c1 9Vanillack4
This one's my favoritest! hehe ;)
3/23/2004 c1 Lazerponies
awe... lots.. and lots of awe. im in envy. envois, enviosity. holy mother of bunnies with substance abuse issues... thats, ok, words.. um.. fantastic? too mild a word... amazing? to vague. Wonderful? perfect? yes.. perfect. thats the one.
3/20/2004 c1 22JTierra1988
this poem is really great ..I lack words to say about it O.o Keep writing! JMBunny
3/7/2004 c1 26Endless Nightmares
Hey-
Great Job on this one, Bob.
Whispers In Silence
3/6/2004 c1 35It was not enough
I like this its really good I especially like the line "Waiting for the day when she could
Leave this place if only she could fly
..
Shaking, not from the cold but from
Making wrong decisions in her life"
its really amazing keep it up
Please R&R some of my work 2

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