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1/3/2007 c1 93Writingsfrommyheart
Its good. I like the start of it. It will ne an interesting story. I can't help thinking some parts are weak, like with Fiona. A good thearpist wouldn't come out ever and say tell me everything about it. Thats not realistic. And be more descriptive!

Other than that its really taking off. Keep working.
3/19/2005 c1 1SomeCowgirl
Well this is different but not bad. Great Work!
3/16/2004 c1 27Tears on the Sidewalk
Oh yes I like this one. yes I do... Update soon!
Peace out-
3/6/2004 c1 14Peregrine Psyche
I like it... don't think I've every seen a story like this. Nice work.
3/6/2004 c1 4Amethyst Fire Knight
Good plot start. You should keep writing. Also when you started on Kerrie's session, you didn't mention what was wrong with her, and i didn't remember from the beginning. It might help if you hinted at each girl's problems until a ilttle further in the story, just so we can keep them straight. Other than that, great job! I'd be glad to read more!
~*Amethyst Fire Knight*~

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