
3/6/2004 c1
28Deluminated
Wow. I really like that poem. I'm adding it to my favorite stories.
Anyway, I have no criticism as to punctuation or spelling. I love the way you present your emotions. Great use of similes!

Wow. I really like that poem. I'm adding it to my favorite stories.
Anyway, I have no criticism as to punctuation or spelling. I love the way you present your emotions. Great use of similes!
3/6/2004 c1
9Casey Lone
Okay...Nothing to say here. Just that I think you need some help with making much happier stories...

Okay...Nothing to say here. Just that I think you need some help with making much happier stories...