for A Sorcerer of Selen5/10/2004 c5 
7Firgof Umbra
After a VERY long absence, I finally return to fictionpress! Expect the next chapters to be posted somewhat regularly, and on a similar note: NEW CHAPTER O_O
Notes: Overall, not much for me to say here. Characters are still developing, grammar still needs to be fixed *a tiny bit* and little other nitpicky things!
Good job so far (and congrats on actually completing this! I still haven't produced a finished book yet! =P) -MaelstromChaotis
7Firgof UmbraAfter a VERY long absence, I finally return to fictionpress! Expect the next chapters to be posted somewhat regularly, and on a similar note: NEW CHAPTER O_O
Notes: Overall, not much for me to say here. Characters are still developing, grammar still needs to be fixed *a tiny bit* and little other nitpicky things!
Good job so far (and congrats on actually completing this! I still haven't produced a finished book yet! =P) -MaelstromChaotis
5/9/2004 c17 2Jamez
*Gasp!* I can't believe he'd do that to poor Julina...and the goddess of darkness yet? Woo! You are a crafty devil! Hehe, thats a compliment! If I didn't know you were continuing this I think I might be depressed. *Sigh, well gotta read the sequel now!
James ^_^_^_^_^ AH!
2Jamez*Gasp!* I can't believe he'd do that to poor Julina...and the goddess of darkness yet? Woo! You are a crafty devil! Hehe, thats a compliment! If I didn't know you were continuing this I think I might be depressed. *Sigh, well gotta read the sequel now!
James ^_^_^_^_^ AH!
5/9/2004 c1 J.T. Baever
yay! i'm a new reader! when i first saw this story, i was quickly intrigued by its summary. your writing style is gorgeous and it all flows beautifully. simply put-your story's amazing. rest assured that i will be back to r&r the rest of it...AND read the sequal!
~Baever
P.S. i'm stickin' you on my Favorite Stories list. *nods* you've definitely earned the spot.
yay! i'm a new reader! when i first saw this story, i was quickly intrigued by its summary. your writing style is gorgeous and it all flows beautifully. simply put-your story's amazing. rest assured that i will be back to r&r the rest of it...AND read the sequal!
~Baever
P.S. i'm stickin' you on my Favorite Stories list. *nods* you've definitely earned the spot.
5/8/2004 c16 Jamez
OMG! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for so long! *tear. I can't believe its over, but I sort of zoomed through this chapter because I'm behind! AH! You stared the second one! AH! Gotta keep reading! Of course I haven't forgotten ANYTHING...I'm not THAT slow...
James ^_^
OMG! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for so long! *tear. I can't believe its over, but I sort of zoomed through this chapter because I'm behind! AH! You stared the second one! AH! Gotta keep reading! Of course I haven't forgotten ANYTHING...I'm not THAT slow...
James ^_^
5/4/2004 c17 2FoolishBeloved
*busts out the champagne and confetti* congratulations! an excellent ending chapter. And good job with the not letting on that it was almost over. I never expected it to end like that. curse those seductive evil goddesses eh? /_= bah, she cursed Danaush...again... haha, well, i will now be going to read the next book, so until then, ja ne.
2FoolishBeloved*busts out the champagne and confetti* congratulations! an excellent ending chapter. And good job with the not letting on that it was almost over. I never expected it to end like that. curse those seductive evil goddesses eh? /_= bah, she cursed Danaush...again... haha, well, i will now be going to read the next book, so until then, ja ne.
5/4/2004 c17 1DKiplan
Oh my gosh. I was so not expecting that. I can't believe he let her do that. Danaush how could you be such an idiot? Still I feel sad for him as well. I must go and read the new story.
1DKiplanOh my gosh. I was so not expecting that. I can't believe he let her do that. Danaush how could you be such an idiot? Still I feel sad for him as well. I must go and read the new story.
5/4/2004 c16 DKiplan
Congratulations on your fifteenth chapter. I can't believe I'm behind in your story. Two chapters. Well i must hurry and read the next one. This chapter was interesting and I had almost forgotten that Danaush had family alive. I'm curious about way his father decided to taint himself and how it is passed down. Also I'm curious to know more about his mother. Well i'm reading on now.
Congratulations on your fifteenth chapter. I can't believe I'm behind in your story. Two chapters. Well i must hurry and read the next one. This chapter was interesting and I had almost forgotten that Danaush had family alive. I'm curious about way his father decided to taint himself and how it is passed down. Also I'm curious to know more about his mother. Well i'm reading on now.
5/4/2004 c17 73An Inside Joke
What? The end? Well, that was certainly unexpected- and Snana was very crepy.
73An Inside JokeWhat? The end? Well, that was certainly unexpected- and Snana was very crepy.
5/4/2004 c17 11Angel 864
Beautiful. I can't help but wonder what will happen to him now, and not only him, but his relationship with Haliha when she finds out. Poor Julina, I feel so bad that Danaush cheated on her. *Sigh* Gosh darn hormones. Keep at it DarkSorceress!
11Angel 864Beautiful. I can't help but wonder what will happen to him now, and not only him, but his relationship with Haliha when she finds out. Poor Julina, I feel so bad that Danaush cheated on her. *Sigh* Gosh darn hormones. Keep at it DarkSorceress!
5/4/2004 c17 blrghjefsadkfjhadf
You know, that was one of the most devious things I've ever read. Well, can't wait for the actual story to begin. I assume it is under a different title, am I right? Well, I can't wait for it to come out. Very goo, story, er...i mean prolouge...thing.
You know, that was one of the most devious things I've ever read. Well, can't wait for the actual story to begin. I assume it is under a different title, am I right? Well, I can't wait for it to come out. Very goo, story, er...i mean prolouge...thing.
5/4/2004 c16 Ye Say Ye Fool
Really, no moe than 15 before? Don't wory, I've never gone more than 12(which is the furthest I've gotten in any of my three stories). Truth br\e told, I've read all the books at least wice, except for the most recent. Fires of Heaven is definitely one of the better ones, though my favorite is The Dragon Reborn, and that is followed by a distantly trailing Lord of Chaos and Fires of Heaven. Thouhg, I do need to reread them all again, seeing as its been over two months since I read one. Hm...I think that Danaush isn't too happy knowing that he has relatives still alive, or knowing thathe is tainted. Well, can't wait for the update!
YSYF
Really, no moe than 15 before? Don't wory, I've never gone more than 12(which is the furthest I've gotten in any of my three stories). Truth br\e told, I've read all the books at least wice, except for the most recent. Fires of Heaven is definitely one of the better ones, though my favorite is The Dragon Reborn, and that is followed by a distantly trailing Lord of Chaos and Fires of Heaven. Thouhg, I do need to reread them all again, seeing as its been over two months since I read one. Hm...I think that Danaush isn't too happy knowing that he has relatives still alive, or knowing thathe is tainted. Well, can't wait for the update!
YSYF
5/4/2004 c16 Nyx Kadar
Yo
Keep up the good work. Your story plot is a vary well written peace of fiction.Althought I personaly find that the format of the chapters is slightly... um... confusing?Part Ons and twos and all. However, other then that your sory is a vary readable one.
P.S. I can't spell so if you find some spelling problems, well then we will both see just why spell check is my friend!
Yo
Keep up the good work. Your story plot is a vary well written peace of fiction.Althought I personaly find that the format of the chapters is slightly... um... confusing?Part Ons and twos and all. However, other then that your sory is a vary readable one.
P.S. I can't spell so if you find some spelling problems, well then we will both see just why spell check is my friend!
5/3/2004 c16 2FoolishBeloved
*joins the party and starts dancing* DDR style! Woohoo! ... isn't hitting a milestone fun? it makes you feel so accomplished. *sigh* ... *glares* of course then there's the inevitable slump, where you can't seem to get two decent paragraphs out in a week.
Good story, Marian sounds like a cool Grandma to have. /_^ Hope the next update isn't too long.
2FoolishBeloved*joins the party and starts dancing* DDR style! Woohoo! ... isn't hitting a milestone fun? it makes you feel so accomplished. *sigh* ... *glares* of course then there's the inevitable slump, where you can't seem to get two decent paragraphs out in a week.
Good story, Marian sounds like a cool Grandma to have. /_^ Hope the next update isn't too long.
5/3/2004 c16 26Phoeaix
Yay I was wondering when he would meet a member of his family...I'm still tempted to call Danuash Raven though.
Well i have no questions for you today ...maybe i was sucked dry of questions while writing the rest of chapter 14 of The Gathering (already uploaded btw)
Looking forward to the next chapter, may it be soon.
26PhoeaixYay I was wondering when he would meet a member of his family...I'm still tempted to call Danuash Raven though.
Well i have no questions for you today ...maybe i was sucked dry of questions while writing the rest of chapter 14 of The Gathering (already uploaded btw)
Looking forward to the next chapter, may it be soon.
5/1/2004 c15 11Angel 864
Darksorceress, I just have to give you props. This story started out well, little description and analysis, but the whole thing worked with your style. Then, midway through reading these chapters, the story began to change from a tale to a novel. I used to see the same adjetives repeated over and over again in earlier chapters, now I see a broad range of color and design. This story has grown so much, I've even been inspired to incorporate a newly developed idea into my story "Falling Snow" because of this piece of literature. I can't find any particular critism except for: don't be so hard on yourself, this chapter gave me chills when I read the bit about them swearing to go through seven hells for him. Keep at it, and great job!
11Angel 864Darksorceress, I just have to give you props. This story started out well, little description and analysis, but the whole thing worked with your style. Then, midway through reading these chapters, the story began to change from a tale to a novel. I used to see the same adjetives repeated over and over again in earlier chapters, now I see a broad range of color and design. This story has grown so much, I've even been inspired to incorporate a newly developed idea into my story "Falling Snow" because of this piece of literature. I can't find any particular critism except for: don't be so hard on yourself, this chapter gave me chills when I read the bit about them swearing to go through seven hells for him. Keep at it, and great job!