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11Angel 864
Excellent! This story is very intriguing, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. (I'm dyeing of hunger, so I must go eat before reading 8-15). I find the characters are developing and keeping very well, a very difficult task for a book this long. I can also see, however, signs of growth and potential growth. I'm happy that you decided to make this your own with Yaoi, even though some would disagre with that choice. Great plot so far, interesting places, everything looks good.
11Angel 864Excellent! This story is very intriguing, and I can't wait to read the rest of it. (I'm dyeing of hunger, so I must go eat before reading 8-15). I find the characters are developing and keeping very well, a very difficult task for a book this long. I can also see, however, signs of growth and potential growth. I'm happy that you decided to make this your own with Yaoi, even though some would disagre with that choice. Great plot so far, interesting places, everything looks good.
4/29/2004 c15 73An Inside Joke
Good chapter- I really like the new part. Do we get to hear from Haliha soon?
You mentioed something about "The Da Vinci Code" in your comments. I'm reading it right now, and it's really good. I'd recomend it.
73An Inside JokeGood chapter- I really like the new part. Do we get to hear from Haliha soon?
You mentioed something about "The Da Vinci Code" in your comments. I'm reading it right now, and it's really good. I'd recomend it.
4/29/2004 c15 Ye Say Ye Fool
Wonderful! Absoballylutin' wonderful! I'm not sure if I see the charater developement that you use in Jordan's books, but still, they're some of the better fantasy novels out there. No questions, comments or complaints in regard to the chapter, so until you update again.
YSYF
P.S. How many of the Wheel of Time books have you read?
Wonderful! Absoballylutin' wonderful! I'm not sure if I see the charater developement that you use in Jordan's books, but still, they're some of the better fantasy novels out there. No questions, comments or complaints in regard to the chapter, so until you update again.
YSYF
P.S. How many of the Wheel of Time books have you read?
4/29/2004 c15 1DKiplan
Fascinating idea, the taint. I like how you delve out information. It flows well with the story. I was surprise at Fuli's desire to stand by Danaush. I'm not sure if I like Julina or maybe I just don't like Julina and Danaush together. Maybe its because I don't know much about her. *ponder* Well I guess I'll see more as the story progresses. I can't wait to see Haliha again. Good chappie. Dayan is evil. Bad Dayan, Bad. The sad thing is I liked him when he first appeared. *sigh* Guess I just have bad taste in men. *grin*
1DKiplanFascinating idea, the taint. I like how you delve out information. It flows well with the story. I was surprise at Fuli's desire to stand by Danaush. I'm not sure if I like Julina or maybe I just don't like Julina and Danaush together. Maybe its because I don't know much about her. *ponder* Well I guess I'll see more as the story progresses. I can't wait to see Haliha again. Good chappie. Dayan is evil. Bad Dayan, Bad. The sad thing is I liked him when he first appeared. *sigh* Guess I just have bad taste in men. *grin*
4/28/2004 c15 2FoolishBeloved
an interesting twist, i must say id didn't expect this. and yet another great chapter may i add. /_^
2FoolishBelovedan interesting twist, i must say id didn't expect this. and yet another great chapter may i add. /_^
4/28/2004 c15 2Jamez
Ah! Evil Dayan! gr...I really hate him. This chapter wasn't very eventful, but strangly enough, it was still great! You sure are talented! I never mentioned this before but I hope we learn more about Scon and Snana soon.
Well, I agree with you about all the harry potter merchandise. Acually, I don't even like the movies that much. If this novel (I feel stupid calling it a story) ever becomes a movie it'll be better than the harry potter ones because it probably won't change how I veiw the characters.
Anyhoo, I eagerly eagerly await the next chapter!
Gosh, I hope Danaush gets strong again soon, it's just not the same with him lying there helpless.
James ^_^
I can see it now! You know, with a bit of editing, This book could be on the shelf at Chapters with a little ribbon sticker thing that says "Best Seller"! Yup yup!
2JamezAh! Evil Dayan! gr...I really hate him. This chapter wasn't very eventful, but strangly enough, it was still great! You sure are talented! I never mentioned this before but I hope we learn more about Scon and Snana soon.
Well, I agree with you about all the harry potter merchandise. Acually, I don't even like the movies that much. If this novel (I feel stupid calling it a story) ever becomes a movie it'll be better than the harry potter ones because it probably won't change how I veiw the characters.
Anyhoo, I eagerly eagerly await the next chapter!
Gosh, I hope Danaush gets strong again soon, it's just not the same with him lying there helpless.
James ^_^
I can see it now! You know, with a bit of editing, This book could be on the shelf at Chapters with a little ribbon sticker thing that says "Best Seller"! Yup yup!
4/28/2004 c2 5L. Conks
Yo! That was a creepy chapter... I see why you rated it R, even though I kinda didn't check that... But oh well. I'm used to reading adult-type books, despite my younger years. The Divinci Code and stuff like that. I'll be checking back later, after I try writing my third chapter!
5L. ConksYo! That was a creepy chapter... I see why you rated it R, even though I kinda didn't check that... But oh well. I'm used to reading adult-type books, despite my younger years. The Divinci Code and stuff like that. I'll be checking back later, after I try writing my third chapter!
4/28/2004 c1 L. Conks
Hi! sorry im not finishing Damien and Laura. No, it'z not that it isn't interestiong, I just...wanted to read this! I saw it on your other website, so I decided it was probably good. It is very interesting so far. Anywayz, thanx 4 your reviews! Tell me what you think of the characters, and if I should make any improvements to my future chapters! Anyways, bck to YOUR story. It's a romance? Yay! I mean, oh... Sorry, I'm obsessed with romance, and nobody knows! I love the internet life... I'm trying to keep the mushy stuff out of Until Tomorrow for now, and put it in later... Stories that I write on paper are usually loaded with nothing except for the junk. But I'm thinking of writing a romance soon... Anyways, why am I using this review to talk about MY stories? I've gotta get back to reading yours! ;-D
Hi! sorry im not finishing Damien and Laura. No, it'z not that it isn't interestiong, I just...wanted to read this! I saw it on your other website, so I decided it was probably good. It is very interesting so far. Anywayz, thanx 4 your reviews! Tell me what you think of the characters, and if I should make any improvements to my future chapters! Anyways, bck to YOUR story. It's a romance? Yay! I mean, oh... Sorry, I'm obsessed with romance, and nobody knows! I love the internet life... I'm trying to keep the mushy stuff out of Until Tomorrow for now, and put it in later... Stories that I write on paper are usually loaded with nothing except for the junk. But I'm thinking of writing a romance soon... Anyways, why am I using this review to talk about MY stories? I've gotta get back to reading yours! ;-D
4/28/2004 c14 blrghjefsadkfjhadf
I just finsished reading this story for the first time, and I loved it! Your charcters came out very nicely, in my opinion at least, with maybe the exception of Fuli and Dunni. I think that they could use a little more work. Also, is the prophecy mentioned earlier in the story going to be revealed soon? 'Cause I really want to know what it says. On one final note, is it just me, or is there a couple references to Wheel of Time? Well, that's all I have to say for now, so please hurry and update again!
I just finsished reading this story for the first time, and I loved it! Your charcters came out very nicely, in my opinion at least, with maybe the exception of Fuli and Dunni. I think that they could use a little more work. Also, is the prophecy mentioned earlier in the story going to be revealed soon? 'Cause I really want to know what it says. On one final note, is it just me, or is there a couple references to Wheel of Time? Well, that's all I have to say for now, so please hurry and update again!
4/27/2004 c14 26Phoeaix
Oh great chapter - i'm interested in exactly why this Scon and Snana want Danaush now (darn it I wish you'd kept his name as Raven)
Anyway i'm also curious as to what Fuli meant as well - but i guess that will be revealed in time
Oh just to let you know I won't be updating The Gathering for awhile - read my profile if you want to know why exactly. Also means i can't review this as regulary as i used to *frowns*
Looking forward to the next chapter, may it be soon.
26PhoeaixOh great chapter - i'm interested in exactly why this Scon and Snana want Danaush now (darn it I wish you'd kept his name as Raven)
Anyway i'm also curious as to what Fuli meant as well - but i guess that will be revealed in time
Oh just to let you know I won't be updating The Gathering for awhile - read my profile if you want to know why exactly. Also means i can't review this as regulary as i used to *frowns*
Looking forward to the next chapter, may it be soon.
4/26/2004 c14 2Jamez
I can DEFINATLY tell you put alot of effort into this chapter! I think it was one of the best yet.
* Great action scene, but I'm going to miss 'Raven' even though I'm sure he's still the same now that he's Danaush and older.
* Well I saw the two of them together. (Julina and Him) It works out well, but it's so weird not seeing him as a little guy anymore. I mean sure two and a half years isn't THAT much, but it is when there is a posibility of change in a character. Well anyway, I guess I'll have to suck it up and learn to love this Danaush.
* When he could only see that thing, for some reason it reminded me of harry potter, sorry if you have no clue what I'm talking about or didn't even read those books, but it's still great and unique in its own way. That creature was freaky!
And there are evil guys now I see, conpiring to do something or other.
* Fuli is less mysterious now, but I still want to read Fuli and Dunni.
And I hate Dayan so much. I know he didn't even play a big role in this chapter, but if he makes Danaush (wow thats still weird typing it) mad then so be it! I hate him! Hehe.
~*~ You're doing an awsome job on this story! And this update was pretty quick. I haven't been updating because well I think I have worse writer's block than before! Right now I'm not even a quarter done the next chapter for Meadows of Fire (but I'm not quitting...NEVER!) Muahahahhahahaha!
Later!
James ^_^
2JamezI can DEFINATLY tell you put alot of effort into this chapter! I think it was one of the best yet.
* Great action scene, but I'm going to miss 'Raven' even though I'm sure he's still the same now that he's Danaush and older.
* Well I saw the two of them together. (Julina and Him) It works out well, but it's so weird not seeing him as a little guy anymore. I mean sure two and a half years isn't THAT much, but it is when there is a posibility of change in a character. Well anyway, I guess I'll have to suck it up and learn to love this Danaush.
* When he could only see that thing, for some reason it reminded me of harry potter, sorry if you have no clue what I'm talking about or didn't even read those books, but it's still great and unique in its own way. That creature was freaky!
And there are evil guys now I see, conpiring to do something or other.
* Fuli is less mysterious now, but I still want to read Fuli and Dunni.
And I hate Dayan so much. I know he didn't even play a big role in this chapter, but if he makes Danaush (wow thats still weird typing it) mad then so be it! I hate him! Hehe.
~*~ You're doing an awsome job on this story! And this update was pretty quick. I haven't been updating because well I think I have worse writer's block than before! Right now I'm not even a quarter done the next chapter for Meadows of Fire (but I'm not quitting...NEVER!) Muahahahhahahaha!
Later!
James ^_^
4/26/2004 c14 1DKiplan
*grin* Wow that was a quick update! It had fighting in it. I love magical fighting scenes and you did a good job on it too. Fuli is very mysterious. But I have to say my favorite part was the demons. The description for the demons was very good. How he could only see them and it was just so cool. I'm babbling so I'll quit now. Good update!
1DKiplan*grin* Wow that was a quick update! It had fighting in it. I love magical fighting scenes and you did a good job on it too. Fuli is very mysterious. But I have to say my favorite part was the demons. The description for the demons was very good. How he could only see them and it was just so cool. I'm babbling so I'll quit now. Good update!
4/25/2004 c13 2FoolishBeloved
Whe yaoi, sque! /_^;; heh, i mean yes, they'd make an interesting couple. an excellent long chapter, longer is god. anywho, i'm tired and bored so i'm going to shut up before i start babling
ja ne
Loki-sama
2FoolishBelovedWhe yaoi, sque! /_^;; heh, i mean yes, they'd make an interesting couple. an excellent long chapter, longer is god. anywho, i'm tired and bored so i'm going to shut up before i start babling
ja ne
Loki-sama
4/24/2004 c13 1DKiplan
Good chapter. I'm glad you updated so soon. Haliha is a very cool character. So dunni and her are related then...hopefully. Also are the knights she's joining associated with the same knights that destroyed her home and enslave her? As to Fuli and Dunni slash fic, I would enjoy it. Looking forward to it. Also I'll update as soon as possible.
1DKiplanGood chapter. I'm glad you updated so soon. Haliha is a very cool character. So dunni and her are related then...hopefully. Also are the knights she's joining associated with the same knights that destroyed her home and enslave her? As to Fuli and Dunni slash fic, I would enjoy it. Looking forward to it. Also I'll update as soon as possible.