for A Sorcerer of Selen3/18/2004 c3 
2Jamez
This story sounds like it had a lot of thought put into it. I like it! oh, and do you mean to put alot of spaces in between each paragraph? not that its a problem...I acually think its easier to read like that. Keep updating! I'll be waiting...well not really waiting on the internet the whole time, but you know what I mean! I'll be checking back alot I mean - oh nevermind! (keep writing)
James ^_^
2JamezThis story sounds like it had a lot of thought put into it. I like it! oh, and do you mean to put alot of spaces in between each paragraph? not that its a problem...I acually think its easier to read like that. Keep updating! I'll be waiting...well not really waiting on the internet the whole time, but you know what I mean! I'll be checking back alot I mean - oh nevermind! (keep writing)
James ^_^
3/17/2004 c2 Jamez
Well that was interesting. I have to admit the Yaoi suprised me a bit (I think i know what it means now) but it was still good. And that part wasn't too bad, but still: good call on rating it R, hehe.
Keep writing!
James ^_^
Well that was interesting. I have to admit the Yaoi suprised me a bit (I think i know what it means now) but it was still good. And that part wasn't too bad, but still: good call on rating it R, hehe.
Keep writing!
James ^_^
3/17/2004 c1 Jamez
This story is far from desperate for reviews! It'll get more for sure, it sounds really interesting! And I'll keep reading too.
James ^_^
This story is far from desperate for reviews! It'll get more for sure, it sounds really interesting! And I'll keep reading too.
James ^_^
3/17/2004 c3 2Jr.Jizz
Kick ass chapter once again Kristen! Loved it seriously. That high lady is such a bitch. Haha :D
2Jr.JizzKick ass chapter once again Kristen! Loved it seriously. That high lady is such a bitch. Haha :D
3/16/2004 c3 Sadie
Amazing story! Please write more!
Amazing story! Please write more!
3/16/2004 c2 3InuyashaLuver99
I liked your story. It was great! If you recall, you reviewed my story, The Sorcerer's Curse. Hope you R&R again!
3InuyashaLuver99I liked your story. It was great! If you recall, you reviewed my story, The Sorcerer's Curse. Hope you R&R again!
3/15/2004 c3 26Phoeaix
Okay this really is getting good, you planning on making Haliha a lesser main charecter? (if you know what i mean that is)She doesn't really seem to be much of a gang leader if she is starving, but oh well...i like her name too.
Oh and if Mala knew Raven was the one she was looking for why did she allow Haliha to get arrested along with Raven? Sorry for all the questions which if you answer them right now will probably be major spoiler *grin*
Looking forward to the next chapter!
26PhoeaixOkay this really is getting good, you planning on making Haliha a lesser main charecter? (if you know what i mean that is)She doesn't really seem to be much of a gang leader if she is starving, but oh well...i like her name too.
Oh and if Mala knew Raven was the one she was looking for why did she allow Haliha to get arrested along with Raven? Sorry for all the questions which if you answer them right now will probably be major spoiler *grin*
Looking forward to the next chapter!
3/12/2004 c2 2Jr.Jizz
O, sexy Kristen! Haha Really kick ass story! I can't wait for the next chapter, so don't leave me in suspense and quickly write it up! :D
2Jr.JizzO, sexy Kristen! Haha Really kick ass story! I can't wait for the next chapter, so don't leave me in suspense and quickly write it up! :D
3/9/2004 c2 Amilie
Hey, your story looks like it will be very good. Solid premise, well written, can't wait for more. Will yaoi be featured heavily or just small bits? Just wondering cause I'm very much a slash fan lol.
Keep up the good work...and the updates!
Hey, your story looks like it will be very good. Solid premise, well written, can't wait for more. Will yaoi be featured heavily or just small bits? Just wondering cause I'm very much a slash fan lol.
Keep up the good work...and the updates!
3/7/2004 c2 26Phoeaix
Well that was quick! Good chapter and after staring out the window for 5 minutes my mind has gone blank of what i wanted to say *grin*
Oh and i like the name Raven, sounds like a name a thief or someone of the sort would have in my opinion. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
26PhoeaixWell that was quick! Good chapter and after staring out the window for 5 minutes my mind has gone blank of what i wanted to say *grin*
Oh and i like the name Raven, sounds like a name a thief or someone of the sort would have in my opinion. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.